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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! Please continue you!
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God damn it, if something happened to Jason i'm going to come over there and kick your ass *winks*
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm quite enjoying this story, there is definately a progress in the writing along the chapters!
Also I love the two main characters... I can really relate to them (Jason for the personality and Felix for the musical taste xP).
Looking forward to the next update!
Also I love the two main characters... I can really relate to them (Jason for the personality and Felix for the musical taste xP).
Looking forward to the next update!
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such an evil evil cliffy!!! can't wait for the next update!!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story so far, but you just had to leave a cliff hanger!!!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was such a cute chapter until the end. I really have no idea what to make of that. Anyway it was a really good update. They just keep getting better. Hope you update soon.
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! What happened to Jason? You have to update soon!!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGH twisttttt
Not to mention a major cliffie. Jeez, you're so mean. I really enjoy this story, and your spelling and grammar are very good. For that alone I thank you, lol. Now if you'd just update a little more quickly, it'd be just perfect ;) But alas, I realize that the creative process takes time, so I will diligently watch your page until the next chapter. Keep up the twisty plot, Sperks <3
Not to mention a major cliffie. Jeez, you're so mean. I really enjoy this story, and your spelling and grammar are very good. For that alone I thank you, lol. Now if you'd just update a little more quickly, it'd be just perfect ;) But alas, I realize that the creative process takes time, so I will diligently watch your page until the next chapter. Keep up the twisty plot, Sperks <3
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh noooo!!!!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello There!
Ohhhhhhhhhh! a cliffhanger!!!!!!! ^_^
Jason's persona took a complete 360 this chapter, and at first, I was like, who -is- this? But if his emotionless personality has something to do with morphine..... That's a completely different angle.
I like it.
I can't wait till next chapter- I want to see how your setting has improved, and that didn't show up much in this chapter.
I also loved the part where Jason comments on the hearts and initials carved into the table. Is it symbolism, or foreshadowing? That was a beautiful scene.
Hmmm.... I have very little else to say. Watch your minor characters, and your setting. You're doing great. Don't be discouraged that no one reviews; it happens to everyone's stories. I would suggest changing your summary- make it more intriguing. You'll get more readers, and, with that, reviewers.
Oh! You have another story out! I'm going to review that one, too!
^_^
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
Much Love
Dee
Ohhhhhhhhhh! a cliffhanger!!!!!!! ^_^
Jason's persona took a complete 360 this chapter, and at first, I was like, who -is- this? But if his emotionless personality has something to do with morphine..... That's a completely different angle.
I like it.
I can't wait till next chapter- I want to see how your setting has improved, and that didn't show up much in this chapter.
I also loved the part where Jason comments on the hearts and initials carved into the table. Is it symbolism, or foreshadowing? That was a beautiful scene.
Hmmm.... I have very little else to say. Watch your minor characters, and your setting. You're doing great. Don't be discouraged that no one reviews; it happens to everyone's stories. I would suggest changing your summary- make it more intriguing. You'll get more readers, and, with that, reviewers.
Oh! You have another story out! I'm going to review that one, too!
^_^
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
Much Love
Dee