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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, so they've had a roller coaster of a time getting to this point. Very cool story.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This stroy is amazing, keep up the good writing. I really think you could persue a future in making storries, they are amazingly detailed, and very realistic. and im really interested in finding out what is going to happen with Jason and Felix, they make such a cute couple. but im not sure what felix is gonna do, he seems like such a player...anyhoo, keep writing!!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, you're threatening the reviewers -_-;; I guess it's only fair to review, since you're spending your time writing the story, ne?
Well, it's getting pretty good so far, but you might want to break away from the...Eh, I don't know, repetition? Like, say, bring the house mates more into the story instead of singling out the two main characters, or bring some angst or conflict into it. You know, if you are looking for it to be a longer story. It's going pretty well, I'd hate for it to be rushed. Or maybe I'm just a literary retard.
Well, I hope you do get a lot of reviews, for I would love to continue to read this story. Keep up the good work.
~ Lavi
Well, it's getting pretty good so far, but you might want to break away from the...Eh, I don't know, repetition? Like, say, bring the house mates more into the story instead of singling out the two main characters, or bring some angst or conflict into it. You know, if you are looking for it to be a longer story. It's going pretty well, I'd hate for it to be rushed. Or maybe I'm just a literary retard.
Well, I hope you do get a lot of reviews, for I would love to continue to read this story. Keep up the good work.
~ Lavi
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a fantastic chapter :)
You are doing a great jobb ;)
please review soon :D
take care:D
You are doing a great jobb ;)
please review soon :D
take care:D
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm still reading, so you better keep on writing :)
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What ever you do dont stop writing it!........yeah i know...poor inspiration...but still! Me loves this fic! I would be so sad if it wasnt updated anymore!
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update!! i'm glad they're gonna try going on a date!! can't wait for the next update!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Pick me Pick me
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo!! See this is why I should only read oneshots, there's not as much of an opportunity for a character to mess things up. Ahem, that is to say in the negative context ;)
Poor Jason, just when he was having fun he has to go and get a fix. Assuming of course that is what he left so suddenly to do; morphine makes you numb and I assume he felt the need to quell the feelings brought up by Felix' comment. Boo. If he lets Felix see him using or passed out or OD'ed, I'm going to have to rehab his ass.
Boo and thrice boo. I really shouldn't read angsty fics but the fluff in between is so much more satisfying. This chapter was so cute I giggled for a good ten minutes. But I guess it's back to more plot, I do want to find out how Jason became addicted to morphine-did he become hooked after using it legitimately or does he have a shadier reason? Write like the wind, Sperks!
Poor Jason, just when he was having fun he has to go and get a fix. Assuming of course that is what he left so suddenly to do; morphine makes you numb and I assume he felt the need to quell the feelings brought up by Felix' comment. Boo. If he lets Felix see him using or passed out or OD'ed, I'm going to have to rehab his ass.
Boo and thrice boo. I really shouldn't read angsty fics but the fluff in between is so much more satisfying. This chapter was so cute I giggled for a good ten minutes. But I guess it's back to more plot, I do want to find out how Jason became addicted to morphine-did he become hooked after using it legitimately or does he have a shadier reason? Write like the wind, Sperks!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was great! I love this story!