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by GrayMercury

schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh man it doesnt have a proper ending. Please you just have to update. Also a description of what Chrry looks ike would be good like you could say it from Takas point of view just noticing how beautiful Cherry really is!!!! Oh I love it you have a great begining and cant wait to read the rest.