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Love this story !!!!! i was so happy to see you had updated:):)
Please pLEASE Please update SOON

It's about time to see an update. Love it, can't wait for the next chapters!

The summary made this story sound really interesting and that's hard. As a junior in college getting my degree in writing arts/journalism it's hard to take something from your head and make it pop out from the paper into other peoples faces.
I would like to start my review by saying you write absolutely beautifully, but sometimes writers just release their characters into the world thinking that beautiful writing, and nothing else, is enough to make the characters to come alive. I don't want this story to fall into the same category.
But great job. Keep up the great work. I'll read more and I hope we can review each other back and forth. Just have read ch1 so far. :-D

You know what I like about your writing? You don't give the reader too much too fast. I have a problem doing that sometimes. I'll have gotten to the climax of the story by chapter 2 and the whole story will just end up looking like word diarrhea. Lol. You leave your story with some place to go and something to be imagined still. Keep up the good work.

pleaseeeeeee update soooooonnnnnnnnnn

This is a very well done story so far. I'm looking forward to the next update

Yay u updated, that was soo good, and it seems fang wants blue to himself and not just for a little quickie
lol
pleaseeeeeeee update soooooonnn xxxxxxxxxxx

This story is really good, please continue this and update soon x

Darn this is really good i cant wait to see what happens next so up-dates soon please!

love it update soon