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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amanda darling. If you could fix up your chapter, break it into paragraphs,
I think people would read it more seriously.
Honestly, seeing one whole chunk of words like that scared me. my eyes went
all swirly.
Hope my 2 cents helps =)
all the best!
- nekoii
I think people would read it more seriously.
Honestly, seeing one whole chunk of words like that scared me. my eyes went
all swirly.
Hope my 2 cents helps =)
all the best!
- nekoii