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for The Adventures of Josie

by sexykitty

schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg ali, totally digging this story. glad i found it. loving this brian guy.
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
haha hot pocket, but i like it better than his other picture. josie should have just told brian she didn't want to go. and wow, kiss was faster than i expected!
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh crap, nm, totally confused nick with brian
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol brian with the food is interesting. i like how u characterize the characters...i like gansta 2, just wish names were a bit different, less confusing, omg it's 4:23am..../=
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ugh and right when i thought brian was nice, figures, but is it weird to want someone to bug me? i know i'll regret it if it happens, but i guess someone who bugs me who is cute yeah...lol and mr. k is pretty kool! ;)
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol a little confused by little details in story, but not enough to get off track. though what was the "talking" thing? i can't help feel sorry for nick a little/is there a reason for the way he acts?
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahhha brian...i love the turn in the story to josie's issues with her dad, i can kinda relate i think, there was this once incident and maybe others? but my mom doesn't remember that one incident which almost makes me feel like i'm making it up. i wanna remember but at the same time i'm scared if i do. anyways, i'm curious about the times josie acknowledged brian too and yeah kissing to me is slimy idk if maybe hopefuly i just haven't had the greatest experiences that's y
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i wonder who was the voice and i wish i could be tough like josie, lovving ur story!! and hating that i discovered it at the time that i did, cuz i lack self-discipline :( almost 5am
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg is the mystery voice her dad?! :( and i don't get the joke about jerome being black.
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aw poor josie, so clueless. not that i might be the same way, but yeah. yay for mike and josie getting along better and stupid brian