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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I liike your story. It's really good, it's one of the best i've read so far on AFF, so don't give up okay?
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome, though, I think that you should reread or at least get a beta, but I love it otherwise!!
I don't have a favorite character because I like 'em all. Hahahaa.
I don't have a favorite character because I like 'em all. Hahahaa.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my fave is Scott :), this story rocks although i think you should proof read it because there are some typos or random letters missing every once in a while otherwise, its great. i truly LOVE this story. lol its my soap :)
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uuuh.. just finished your story, well, yea, up to 12.
can you say aweosme?
lol
i love it.
can you say aweosme?
lol
i love it.
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I love the story, although the switching between brothers bit is a bit soap opera-ish. But, that's life, right? I would definitely suggest a) adding some more chapters (hee hee I HAD to throw that in there) and b) resolve Rochelle and Danny soon (although from your last chapter, doesn't seem like that's gonna take a long time). Keep writing, have fun, blessed be!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It only gets better! :]
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I need to add, people need to comment more... seriously.. your story is worth the commenting, or reviewing. lol, whatever. But it's worth it.
You can count on my review. :]
You can count on my review. :]
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O yea, I like your main characters the most of course.
but i like Yvonne 'cause she's really laid back and funny. :P
but i like Yvonne 'cause she's really laid back and funny. :P
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like your characters, a lot. Your story is interesting. Keep it coming.
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, OMG. I'm like, on the 4th chappie and like, wow, ur story srly makes me addicted to it. cant wait to c read more of it! i just had to comment =)