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by KissTheDawn

schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, if I hadn't seen mothers exactly like her, I could never believe people like this existed.
I really do hope Lilly can help him out, although what he actually needs is professional help. Can't wait for your next update.

Suzie
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I really want to know the connection between them two and why she reacted like this upon hearing his name... it will be very interesting to read about his little getaway and how he'll react to Lilly's home environment.

Suzie
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, does Nero come from a powerful family? His mother did a terrible job dealing with his accident. I'm glad she's out of the picture. I hope Lilly helps him out with accepting and finally loving himself. Nice updates. :)

Suzie
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much! I'm waiting to see Lilly's whole first reaction and your description about Nero. :)

Suzie