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Awesome kiix. I think Chocolate would fit. Can't wait to read the rest of the saga and hopefully the ending. then going to wait till you publish cake to read the whole saga again. WOOOOOOO!

Duh I'm glad you came up with another ending for Candy ! I would have hate to see Armor leaving with Kain, a mere replica of his father...I can't wait for book 6 !! Aida

hmmm...about that Armor with Kain. I also think that i wouldn't be happen...except there's certain point that Kain similar to Xavier. But i dunno bout that. And about Xavier chase like psycho maniac..please no...it's like soap opera where girls jealous over something and on rampage...
It's really weird to see Xavier that way. The think i can think of if the scenario were to happen is...Xavier suicide, or at least that the personality is just vanished. No longer xavier there... cause he's like 'made' by Armor...and so he just feeling 'useless'.

I really wanna see one personality dies! or at least the possibility.ahahahaaha. It would be massive dose of angsty and hard plot. Hmm...from i read from 1 book to the other is where u make it cliffie(xavier was abducted by orel wessel when he's running to cemetery)...and make us curious until few chapter of next book(where skell born). I really really curious about how u make it this time...

Thank you for such good work!

ri

Ah..forgot to add my opinion.Just a lil piece of mind...pardon me if there's some thing that i interpreted wrong..

hmm...Armor is thinking of changing himself, right? to certain point that he think better. Is he think that Xavier won't change as well? Kinda bit egotistical in my opinion. How if Xavier really become different than what he likes after this event...(since xavier now is the one that armor created? am i right) And since Claudius said that if 'this thing with Armor is not work' or something, then He'll like ...hmm...accept and help xavier to forgot his heartache (arghh...i dunno the suitable word)...
So...the family should be supporting whatever xavier decide now...if he want to change...

i'm curious how xavier'll go on after the end of candy...

ri

Just wondering...if you don't use chocolate, how about COOKIES or CHERRIES or COCOA or COFFEE or COCONUT or CREAM or CUSTARD or CRANBERRY (hey that circles right back to Cake when armor/marus kept giving xavier/sex cranberry juice and a lime wedge)...just a few I came up with...feel free to use any of them or all of them...LOL! Great writing and I'm extremely happy with the way Candy turned out

a) those are some pretty impressive stats
b) I'm liking 'chocolate' but you'll need to work choco yumminess into the book - is that possible? A new essence or...?
c) I'm definitely a little scared of what book 6 is going to be like, but I definitely want to know/read it.

Yay!

~Spiritxx

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CHAPTER 47
The descriptions look very good. Straight to the point and not overloaded.

About the art: As far as I know, your publisher comissions art from deviantart.com, there are so many talanted artists in need of commision there :)
Do you have some book cover examples in mind which you really like and wish for something similar?

i kinda interested doing it XD. But may i know if there's specific style u prefer...like whether u dun mind manga style...or maybe u prefer realism,etc. *WHOA! this title will be published as well?? this is the first of ur work i've read!*

Ri

haha, well, I said before, I think we were spoiled by your long long stories, but if you think this is a great place to stop off, then I'll accept it too :) Plus it sounds like the timing for this story coincided really badly with what was happening to you in real life, so I definitely understand why you would want to stop off there!