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by kiix

person k
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a shock and I thought you would sacrifice Vlad. If Claudius comes back as Lex, Sex will have a hard time waiting for him to grow, so I hope our beloved black death will return being as adult as now. (Or you moove the story up to that point) Don't let Liam be his father, please!

That's the only candidate I can think of, would explain some events [for example Hades' infatuation with Claudius]. If he (or Sigmund) is his father, the brothers will have to rethink their opinion about sleeping with blood-relatives.

I will cry like a baby - at least I know beforehand I need lots of tissues. Sniff.

It's good Vlad is with Sex, he will have to convey comfort. Is there a chance, the incident can fix something between the brothers and Hades? It will hurt honeybee a hell of a lot too.
person Rosei
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15

Very bold move to kill off Claudius
and bring him back.
I know I'll cry along with everyone
else. (Note to self, pick up that
special box of tissue, the one with
the tissue that won't turn me scaly!)

Cataclysmic events will ensue.

Thanks again,
R
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou so much for the encouragement and suggestions. I hope to continue writing and I will make that a prolouge, that is what it was orignally and I failed to translate it to the site T_T thankyou so much once again your an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of your works.
-Midnight
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shock* So I came to check this out after my review over at Cinnamon. I guess that answers my question about Claudius' bigger role.

I would love to protest and say.. NO! Don't harm Claudius, but I suppose... if it's going to keep the story going.. it's a good thing.

Thanks for asking the Loyals though!
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And the bit about Claudius' father..

It couldn't be Liam, could it? It would explain the blue blood in him.. and the reason why Claudius could actually withstand Hades (must be in the blood..) But then, I thought Liam never had a son? Even if it was a bastard son, wouldn't Liam have done something about it? I mean, he could've made Claudius another Blood Emperor, instead of waiting 400 years.
person Spirit
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No no no no no
You may not kill Claudius. Sex is too fragile.
If Claudius cries, I'm going to bawl my eyes out. I'll still continue reading, but I would really really really really really like it if Claudius stayed alive.
Thankies

~Spiritxx
person Rainy
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kill Claudius?? *greatly worried* That just might KILL and shatter Sex if that happens! Well, Sex would be able to kill the killer without too much remorse and would be able to keep on going no matter what pain he received in the battle first. Then after said bastard is dead, then Sex will shatter and be lost. It could reallllly be scary and messy.
Nah, I think if you killed Claudius in the right way, you would keep readership, but.... I really don't know what that would do to Sex. The after-effect could make Az the Angel of Death look like Az, the petty thug.
Ohhhhh.......
person L
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You absoloutely cannot do that! I personally would most likely still keep reading, but more out of spite or habit than for the pure joy of reading. It would be like one of those really good action-series on TV, where the people, who write them, run out of ideas and start writing these doomsday-is-coming-hide-under-a-rock-and-wait-for-the-apocalypse kind of episodes. Besides, Claudius seems to be the one keeping the whole thing together - why would you want to write him out?
person oreade
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to butt in with this when I've been gone so long...

While I do trust you to write captivating and satisfying stories, I feel sick to the bone at the thought of losing Claudius. You wouldn't lose me as a reader though 'cause I'm sure you'd make his death worth it.
That all said, Claudius/Sasha is just too precious a character to lose. He is the one holding things together now (with his a little fucked up but striking personality that I love so much).
person HallowsEve
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huh?What!Why?
I will sill read but i think he is a great char and what about sex? or is he going to end up with wolf boy?
in the end it is up to you and your char's but it will be a very sad moment if it happens.
-HallowsEve