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I am soooooo excited for you Kiix.

I hope this pull through for you!!!!! Having the series would be freaking awesome. I would buy copies and give them to my friends.

I hope this where i can ask questions.don't kill me if i am wrong.

"Her name is Katherine Williams…well Fieldings now." CH 42

but shouldn't be the other way around??? i mean the females werewolf(lycan) are dominant one. So shouldn't the husband take one the name of the female???

PLEASE, PLEASE CHECK YOUR FORUM. AND THANK YOU FOR MAKING IT!!

This was actually an incredibly entertaining read! :D I have read several of your stories by now so I guess I can call myself a "Loyal". Heh. I like that. ^^;;

Anyway, I think I might have to check out that piece of "Cake" you mentioned. I really need to distract myself from studying. XD

Keep up your great work!

~jea

so this is a place where we can ask question about your great work???i really don't understand.

Well, kiix, first, I gotta say that you have to finish Clove sooner rather than later --you just have to! No ifs, ands, buts, or candy-wielding-dark-muses about it. Maybe then you can give the brothers a break and work on Brant or catboy or AnK.

Truly, all of your work is amazing, so we fans just want to read more of your work. And well, if your creative mind is pulling you in one direction, then roll with it. Because, truly, we don't mind who you write about, we just want you to write! All of your characters lately have been enthralling. I'm having trouble getting into some of your older stories, but even when I didn't totally enjoy the first chapter of Tentacles, I was still interested in hearing about Walter.

As for the brothers... yes, well, things are always better in threes, huh? I think Skell did well in the beginning, and maybe 'k' is right and he should be absorbed into Az when his job is done (but that would also be sad). Sex, well, he's my favorite, but hey, maybe that's just the author's preference showing through. X has always been a putz in my mind, which is why he complements Armor so well. He's less dark than the others and that may be why you're having trouble hearing him. If you can't write X well in your current headspace, then hold off on Clove (*gasp* what am I saying!), because he's needed for a strong ending, rt?

Well, that's my opinion, for whatever it's worth! =)

Hi Kiix,

why not enjoy darkness and candy before going on writing?

quote, '(...)It’s hard to get into that 4th brother’s head space. Skell, skelly baby, work with me. Sex is taking over. X…well X is hard to bring out lately. Why?(...)', unquote.

Here are my two cents about the 'issue'. I have the same problem reading about Skell and I have the strong feeling it's about Skell not meant to stay permanently. Why else wouldn't he talk to you? He is a part of Sex and thus X and Azrael, that they don't want and never really accepted. I don't mean as a brother but as being Hashmallim. Maybe it's due to the fact they never realized Hashmallim not being a name but a state. What I'm trying to say is, I have a feeling Skell won't be needed after accomplishing the task of Hashmallim - the part of destroying - maybe the destroyer can't reside in the same body as the harbringer. Skell resembles the darkest or most unwanted parts of every of the other brothers: Sex's dark (Sex can't be or stay dark for he is internally light) and his heartache, Azrael's guilt towards Lanseng and Marcus, X's fear of his own strenght and power and maybe even the hetero-sport-thing. I have a feeling creating Azrael was something of a first try wedging that dark side off. It would explain his limited blue-line gifts, Endellion in his hand and Lansengs attraction to him. Thinking so, I deem it naturally once Hashmallim is done destroying he will (re-)unite with Azrael and finally make him complete, giving him blue-line-gifts of his own etc. Well, what about Lanseng? He is for Hashmallim and Hashmallim alone, so he will desintegrate back into source-power and wait for the next arising of the big H to be reshaped into the world. (I bet he hopes it will not be Liam again) So much about Skell.
X ... he's a hard case, always trying to solve all problems inside of his (part of their) head. I'm not surprised about X distancing himself. He is struggling with guilt of different kinds and he has to act in ways that are simply not suited for him. I wouldn't takl much either. Maybe give him some times with his kids to remind him of his heart's duty and he might get better. He also should learn to talk with Claudius or Marcus. I understand Claudius is all wrapped up in his own 'problems' but X needs a father because his Armor is still to inexperienced to lessen his burden. His constant distracting X instead of once hearing him out is testament to it. Marcus would be strong enough but only X knows if he can trust Marcus that much. In any case he needs someone and it better not be Liam - the man can't be trusted. I would be fine if it was Claudia. She is after all his sister and his empress but she gains all her information from other parts of the family. The boys lock her out and that's not fair. bla bla bla

quote, 'Iason and Riki have started kicking up a fuss. '

Oh yeah, Iason kicking up a fuss. 'Dear Kiix, I would appreciate you returning to your desk and writing some more about my person. I am a Blondie and you making no progress in writing my prise is barely adequate treatment for an elite.' ... never mind

Brant not talking to you ... he's just a nice 'kid', giving you time for the boys. At first I thought Brant would turn into another version of your Hans while still being completely different. I like that you don't leave us hanging at the same point where 'I was His' ended but somehow I hope this one will turn out a darker road - hhe hints are there. Oh delicious darkness. BTW Brant is not right about not being his sisters brother. He is related to them by their mother - they are his half-sisters.

I wish you well, recharging your muse (diet-cola is absolutely not healthy and suited for a well used brain. Farmers use it for some reason for fattening pigs and cows).

K

we are here with you kiix!!!

Hello Kiix,

Thank you for answering! I posted a reply in the forum section.

enticed as usual....hum

this could get complicated and messy real quickly.

This might be strange but I think Skell needs to come out and yell at everyone. I mean get everyone in the same room. Well all the adults. Yell at them all and pull them back in. They are all acting like children. I don't think anyone gets what he went though what the body went though. I think they all think everything would go back to normal. Only problem he is the boss! I think Skell needs to do it for he has no ties to them.
They are all doing the me, me, me, thing. Not fuck you went though 7 yrs of hell you might be having some problems lets talk about it.
He has a very big job to do and everyone is pulling him down with there needs and wants. He has sons and daughters he doesn't know and a nation to run. I think everyone should instead of fighting with him support him. They are meant to be family. He has saved everyone one of them. What are they doing for him? Nothing but hurting him.
If I was sex I wouldn't have waited I would have killed myself. The only thing he had to hold onto left him. He waited 7yrs for him and it was throw in his face.
If I was Claudius I would be freaking right know. Sex is his first thing he chose to commit to. The first person he has truly loved and doesn't know what to do.

I think I have ranted enough. I hope I helped a little.