AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Lady of the Beasts

by FairyPeacock

person Justlooking
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I think you could have spent a little more time on some parts; such as her time with the wolves. It would have been nice if she could have ended up with a wolf biologist but all in all it was a well written story using an interesting concept.
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm riveted to this story. I really like how you've developed Coral/Fury. This poor girl has been through hell with people. It would be nice to see her get back to her pack, or find a human that would really be good to her.

There are some typos in your story that you really need to sort out. It makes the story a bit hard to follow at times, but nothing major.

I look forward to reading more.
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I kinda had an idea about this, an animal wolf women, but not the whole prostitution thing, poor Fury. She's all caged up after being free.