AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for What if?

by Kiira

person womo
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
meeheehee...what twisted form of angst awaits Michael the Second??? Virginity?? Does that mean more sex??? *hopeful*

cool chapter! that little brother is adorable, in an annoying way. i can totally picture that happening someplace, somewhere.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 1
Wow, that's a nice surprize, AU of a Silent!

Ricky revealed his true self in the chapter one. This is so cool, even if Michael did get shaken by this experience. Ricky is supposed to live the country, right? But Michael is stil the most beautiful boy he had ever met and he didn't get to have him... Will Ricky just be gone or decide on revenge? So many ways this story can go, can't wait to see what's gonna happen.

Tony seems a bit shy and unsure. This may turn so romantic:)

Interesting start, let's see where this will go.
person Gothikah
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chp 1
Michael's okay. I'm so happy he's with Tony and Ricky didn't rape him.
person Laaerie
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahg! he made it out of there! but I know you, and I know the darkness that lurks within your evil mind *snickers* so I am not expecting too much fluff, but lots of angst, even in this alternative option, I know you just have to make them have some obstacles *evils grin* me waiting for more :D

HUGS!

Laaerie
person Mathea
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome! It's cool to see how things had been if this and that, ^_^
Keep it up!

I hope he meets Sam though. That would be so cool! xD
person Scribbles05
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter. I'm very interested in how you're going to pull this story out and can't wait for more. I'm glad you decided to do a side story like this, cause I had always wondered what would it have been like if Tony had accepted Michael at the beginning.
person Felicia
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! -squeals in delight- I love it, but i love all your work. But i have to say Silent was my favorite, I read it religously, so you can bet im gonna keep up with this one as well. Write more soon, thanks. -waits pataintly for next chapter-

Oh and i think that there should be some sort of relationship between Micheal and Willaim, i mean it doesnt have to be romantic but a good solid relationship should build, since he was the one who saved him . . . but hey you dont have to listen to me, But im known for throwing out ideas so you may choose to ignore them it is your story and ill love whatever you write you are my favorite author.

Lots of Love -SilentTears-
person womo
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! he got kicked in the balls! go michael!

person teeta
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An AU of Silent! Without evil Ricky and without Michael being raped! Yay! I already love this story! And love Tony's brother already! He saved Michael! Yay!

Now seriously ... you know I promised you to read this version of Michael's adventures ao count me in as your reader. Oh, and I do hope to be the first reviewer!

See you in the second chapter and lots of love!

-E-
person anan
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so great!