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for What if?

by Kiira

person Mathea
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Got this idea.... xD

Heheeeeeeeeeeeeeeee xD

(don't listen to me... I'm hyper)

Tony and Michael gets romanic and stuff, and then they can have this schooltrip or whatever and they go to that place where he met Sam, and then they can become friends and lot's of love and jealousy and shit and stuff ^_^

LoL

(seriously, don't listen...) ^_^
person Gothikah
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chp 2
Lol that part with Jamie was real funny. Tony and Michael seem so promising as a couple.

Patiently waiting for an update :]
Gothikah
person Gothikah
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chp 2

Awh that was a good chapter. -Not wanting to seem pushy- More more more!xD Sorry I like this 'What If' to Silent. jamie ruined the mood lol.
person Felicia
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I am in love with William!! So im wondering just how big a role William plays in this story, i hope he's a major character. And i am wondering when and in what form the angst will come in. . . And I dont think we have seen the last of Ricky hes so evil and he doesnst give up. Poor Micheal he has two stories of angst he has to go through i just want to huggle him.

Lots Of Love -SilentTears-
person teeta
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeek!!! I know! I'm sorry!! I was supposed to review earlier but the lazy bone in me grew to enormous size and I had to ... ah ... well, now I'm reviewing!

So onto the review!

First of all, I LOVE this version of Michael's adventures! You should never doubt that! If I ever stop liking it, I will tell you myself so don't worry about me secretly hating it.

Secondly, oh, yes, a scene with Michael and Tony! Yay! And it was hot! Finally Michael is not treated as a tool of achieving pleasure but as a human being. Tony's little is a pain in the neck! *chuckles* I can't wait to read when ... you know! Oh, and I totally love Wiliam! Is he even gay? Or straight? But I wish him all the best in his life. For EVERYTHING that he does for Michael *chuckles once more*

Thirdly, Michael and his school ... a very nice touch of realism here, you know, it didn't sound stupid or anything, no need to worry once again.

Was I the person who persuaded you to write 'What if'? Wow, I didn't know that ... Ok, I know you had this plan in your head but ... wow, I feel honored! Thank you!

Ok, I know you're not a fluffer (that's me) and Michael's life won't be all peachy. I am prepared for a big dose of angst (though it's not what I like the most) and hoping to get another chapter soon. Oh, and I look forward to our little project, hehe! See you!
person Shaznay
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"....He wanted to give Tony his virginity, he wanted it bad and he couldn’t wait for the weekend to come." I can't wait for their weekend to come either. This is getting better and better with every new chapter, Kolgrim. (I hope I spelled your name right :-])
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering what it would have been like if Tony stopped him from going. and I freakin like it! Yoo hoo!! update soon please.
person Laaerie
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gimme more!!!!! ah you went to bed already, and you know I'm like a frigging octopus right now... so... in short ---> GIMME MORE!!!!

HUGS!

Laaerie
person Saminada
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeahhhh!!! The other version!!! I'm so happy!!! ^_____^
Man! I hope that Michael won't meet Ricky again anytime soon!!
...But then again, I want him to go to prison! AND FAST!! >___< 'cause even tho this isn't Silent, he still harmed others in the past and I know he will continue to do so until he is stopped!! *That asshole!!!* Grrrrr
Anyways! I'm really happy for Michael right now and the smex was soooooo HOT!!!! Muahahahaha!!!

Now I'm really curious about everything and I wonder how things will turn out for the guys! So plz update soon!
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 2
Suspiciosly sweet chapter! At least Michael got to do some teenage experimenting:) Too sweet for words. I liked that we could see him at school. Wonder if Michael will get to graduate this time.

I am a bit worried about their weekend plans. Have a bad feeling about it for some reason.