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for What if?

by Kiira

person Saminada
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!!! I want moooooreeeee!!!!!
I hope that things will get better someday!! *huggles Michael*

I can't wait to read some more! Plz update soon!
person Mathea
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update this story soon please? ^^
person Mathea
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, pliz...? -__-' xD
person midnighteyes
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow sweetheart.. lovin the story.. Gald you could bring our boys back.. Keep up the good work.. Adam
person Pikkuprinssi :)
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I've read many of your stories, all from this page and many from your own website. You truly are a gifted writer!

"What if" I like especially, maybe because I'm ridiculously romantic...anyways, the love scene in part three is beautifully written, very tasteful and yet quite...dare I say...hot :) so a big thanks to you. I wish my first time had been like that!

My favourite couple from your stories is Joni and Vodka (though I like all the others too)...I told my bf to read some of the chapters about them and he said "Yeah, that's us" :D. So an update for that story is much anticipated also...

I'll keep a close eye on new updates and I promise to review more from now on (now that I finally managed to write this first one...)

Have a great summer!
person Kyusai
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No matter which way you put it Ricky is still an asshole. That bastard! It's interesting thinking now that some of the things that happened to Mikey in the last story won't be happening in this one. But as always, I'm eager to see where you go with this.
person teeta
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww ... This was perfect! Thank you for this scene! Just the way Michael always deserved!

And I'm sorry I couldn't help you with the beta this time but you were just too quick, just last nighty it wasn't ready and today, when I was napping (can you guess why?) you updated. And what an update it has been! Great!

Like you said, I like this version much better and even if some things happen, this is never be so angsty as the original version.

Ok, talk to you later! And thanks for the chap! *hugs*
person Laaerie
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aha! Just like I told you on YM! I liked it! it was nice! HUGS HUGS, and you know you can ramble anytime you need it! I also do that :P

Now go write more!!!!!

Laaerie
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it u tell a very good story im glad micheal lost his cherry a nice way this time
cant wait to see were u take this one im sure it will b fun where ever u choose to take us
person Mathea
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heeeey!
Update the story soon? Please? ^^

*smile*
*gives cookie*

*wave*