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for What if?

by Kiira

person Risatine
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update this story? it's too good to let it go discontinued :(
person fudge
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story! I loved Silent but I was so sad for his situation! I'm so glad you're doing an alternate version! Please update soon!!
person cricri
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow....hot dance scene....not to mention steamy, sweaty sex too...
I think Michael has the right to cheat on Tony, since he's being such an ass....and just because Michael caught him kissing the "bitch" it doesn't mean Tony hasn't done anything with her yet, right?.....right....!!
Poor little sweet Mikey.....better ditch that good for nothing boyfriend
I love this chapter very much....you made it for me, yes??
In that case, then I'll just have to kick your butt harder....hihi...*hugs...kissess..*
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Michael is worrying about his and Tony's relationship; and yet he manages to ruin it further by sleeping with his dance teacher...>.< Oh dear, he jsut lit a fire, didn't he? :P Can't wait to see what happens next!
person Saminada
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... This is not looking good at all! >_<
Poor guys! I wonder if this really is the end of Michael and Tony?? And was that a mere 'one time thing' with Valecio?
Or will there be more between them?? hummmmmm I have no idea what will happen if he and Tony does break up! I just hope that Michael WONT suffer like in he did in Silent!!! T____T It would be way too said! :( X3 That absolutely can't happen again right...yup :D lol

I really liked the chapter! It was great! All the emotions in there were so beautifully described! You did a fantastic job! Thanks alot!!! *hugs*
I can't wait to read more!! XDD
person Mathea
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really wish you'd update this story soon! --- I'll give you a cookie ~nyaaa... ^_^
I want Michael to end up with Sam again! xD
person Mathea
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update this story? It's been ages...

*still waiting*
person Lygia
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phiuh.!!! New chapter at last !!
Although I kind of disappointed with Tony, he should’ve shown more respect and love towards Michael…..he’s acting like he had some kind of disease. I feel sorry for Michael, although lucky for him, his first time was wonderfully romantic, with Tony being so sweet and gentle…..
But I still think that Michael deserves better than him, someone who’re not ashamed of him and their relationship, someone who really cherish and worship him….
Hahaha….can’t get my mind of Sam..
person womo
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
new love interests/conflicts??? my my, this is getting interesting. I hope that valencio guy isn't a fucktard like that other greedy shithead Rick. yay profanity! michael + happiness = goodness....
gasp! and Tony's brother?? heehee...if there's something there....you are so devious.
i can't wait to see where michael's relationship[s] will go! loved the update!
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful i loved this new chapter
*hug* and thank u 4 writing it
i cant wait to see the next chappie to this story
... aand hope it comes soon *begs*