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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, i like your story but..somtimes you write his instead of he is...but other than that great story!!
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahahahahhah well it seems that the person lazarus was reporting to seemed like a young person
hmmm any thing i want??? *eager*
i was kind thinking something along the lines of vincent proving his worth to becky...perhaps
even her developing a crush on him...if it's ok with you
hmmm any thing i want??? *eager*
i was kind thinking something along the lines of vincent proving his worth to becky...perhaps
even her developing a crush on him...if it's ok with you
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! this is getting more and more interesting! I can tell that there is alot behind vincent's character...being that he's some what short tempered and doesn't speak much. but what caught me off guard was gideon's behavior...makes him all the more...suspicious.
^_^
^_^
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*annoying wail* please please please update...pleeeeeeeeeease
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eheheheheh i fell so touched *blushes a bit*
any who...i became a little confused at the end. Did she sarcastically retort so then he slapped her? or did she honestly state something, but he still slapped her?
any who...i became a little confused at the end. Did she sarcastically retort so then he slapped her? or did she honestly state something, but he still slapped her?
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good, you should update soon. I would like to see where this story is going