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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*hanging jaw with drool coming out* THAT. WAS. A. GREAT. FIGHT. SCENE.! ....given that it could have been alot longer (not saying that there should have been more action) but for a small scene it was indeed a great chapter. It wasn't too descriptive and you played out the attacks well. Bravo!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahahahahahhahahahhahahahahah! i just love arguments with the mind or in this case conscious. I take it more of these convos will be taking place?
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, interesting...that water chic totally gave me a laugh. I'm also liking this mysterious bit-by-bit play on the traveler in the story.
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Totally not what i would have expected! Completely caught me by surprise! HOly crap....vincent is pretty damn sexy! I think that was the perfect amount of smut, not to much, but enough to keep a reader coming back for more. I suggest you keep the smut to more or less the same amount as in this chappy, you know? Like building up to the ultimate climax.
aside from that i loved this chapter, so ultimately teasing it was great! ^_^
aside from that i loved this chapter, so ultimately teasing it was great! ^_^
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey I really liked the story lots of details. keep it up.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry i haven't been able to review...T_T my internet was down for quite a while so i'm gonna have to read up on what you've updated! ^_^ i can't wait
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read chp 10....short'n'sweet ^_^ but i like the part were the lord was saying "and this time they've been looking for a baby." ahahhaha it reminded me alot of sleeping beauty. Good job!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! It's interesting to know Vincent's thought on Becky. Naughty status! I think this was a good chapter, you sank in the hook. I did become confused in one part though, when you transitioned from becky's thoughts to vincent's i, for a short moment, thought it was still becky.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was a little bit difficult to understand, perhaps it's the lack of sleep eheheh, but with a little tweak here and there it'll be good. I do like the introductions to these different characters, it's very mysterious and leaves one on the edge!
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahahhahaah i totally loved that one. I didn't think becky would have done that...i can only imagine what vincent is going to do.
ehehehheehheheheh *thinks about it**
ehehehheehheheheh *thinks about it**