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for War and Sex

by Jinchuu

person Bee
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you started your story. Your spartan character is very masculine, you describe his warrior traits very well. I don't know who the mystery woman is, but I can totally see a Persian noble woman...you know? There's a thin line between love and hate and it would be very interesting to see a spartan and Persian woman collide. Very interesting!
Can't wait to read more!!