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is the going to continue? how old are they?

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Wow... I read this on somewhat of a whim! I was really captivated! It was well written and their were few grammatical or spelling errors. You really captured the essence of these two characters and the emotions going on within them

Wonderful job! Will there be any further chapters, or is this a oneshot? (I'd like to see it go on ^^)

that was incredibly well written and i hope your other stories can top this!

Oh, I really liked it! Especially the ending, how you like tied in the whole love thing and everything. Garrison sounds hot.

I loved it. It was really easy to read you are a great writer.

I like this very much,
Good development for a 'one shot'.
If you ever feel like returning to this and completing the story the way you originally intended.
I'll certianly be back here enjoying and reviewing.

Hmm...I haven't read too much of the stories involving minors (moral reasons, really), but I was curious about this one to say the least. I don't know what compelled me to read it, but I'm glad I did.

I saw no spelling or grammatical errors, which is good, and I liked the imagery you added upon his penetrating her. Your writing was splendid, clear as crystal and easy to picture.

Keep up the good work! I was impressed!