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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess I am going to be your first reviewer. I liked the story. it was a little sad but I think that is what you were going for anyway. the mental anguish of a life altering decision. I did notice the few spelling and grammatical errors but nothing so agregious that the reader is unable to understand the story. There was also the name Shannon interspersed through out the story when you were refering to Charlie so you might want to change that. I look forward to reading more. It sounds like it could really develop into something interesting. Oh I also wanted to point out that the title has been used for another story before so you might want to consider a new one or adding more to it to differentiate your story.