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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, I was just catching up with stories in AFF, that I haven't had time to read and then you say you won't update *sniff* Ok, ok, I understand your reasons, I get frustrated with my own characters/stories at times too. But I hope you'll find your inspiration again and continue this at sometime later!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Moar Now!
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gime more or ill shot you.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this...I Really like it.... =^-^=
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
POOR ALEAL! T_T now he won't be able to sneak out to see his god
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah I haven't reviewed in... hm, three chapters? But now I caught up, yay. Aleal got to see his god, aww, and Marcus has the hots for him, hm? *snickers*Yes, I loved reading. Aleal's father seems a bit... annoying creature or something, lol. I'm soo tired wanna go back to bed... But seriously thanks for the fast updates :)
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad that your muse has finally returned!=D now tie it to a chair and never let it leave again!!! and hurry up with chapter 7, i want to know what happens next.
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!=D plz update again soon since i really want to know what will happen when my luna boy wakes up!
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 5
Hi, Natana,
I liked this chapter; it tells a lot about Aleal's life. So, something DID happen to make him special! Maybe his parents are not that crazy, perhaps they know somthing he does not.
About divider line: it needs to be much shorter to fix the problem. The biggest text size in which the page fits my screen is 'medium'. I assume that is what your computer is set-up for. Mine is set on 'largest'. So, all your readers with 'large' and 'largest' settings have to scroll left and right on each line to read the chapter. I made this exact mistake on my story and people let me know about it as well. So, now I use only five symbols as a divider. You can see what I see on my monitor if you change your text size setting up. Or you can post a review with a really looong continuous line and see how everything is stretched on a board. Make sure to remove it, though, hehe.
Hi, Natana,
I liked this chapter; it tells a lot about Aleal's life. So, something DID happen to make him special! Maybe his parents are not that crazy, perhaps they know somthing he does not.
About divider line: it needs to be much shorter to fix the problem. The biggest text size in which the page fits my screen is 'medium'. I assume that is what your computer is set-up for. Mine is set on 'largest'. So, all your readers with 'large' and 'largest' settings have to scroll left and right on each line to read the chapter. I made this exact mistake on my story and people let me know about it as well. So, now I use only five symbols as a divider. You can see what I see on my monitor if you change your text size setting up. Or you can post a review with a really looong continuous line and see how everything is stretched on a board. Make sure to remove it, though, hehe.
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 4
Aww, the divider line had stretched your chapter side-ways. I had to change 'text size' from 'largest' to 'medium' to make it fit the screen.
Marcus has a normal family and is a pretty cool guy:) I liked that. His sister likes Aleal, haha. She is too young for him, though. They called him 'Luna', that's funny. And they knew what the boy was watching the house! I didn't realise that Aleal was so tiny. Can't beleive that his family would torment him like that. And now his uncle knows where the boy goes. Hope he keeps it to himself.
Aww, the divider line had stretched your chapter side-ways. I had to change 'text size' from 'largest' to 'medium' to make it fit the screen.
Marcus has a normal family and is a pretty cool guy:) I liked that. His sister likes Aleal, haha. She is too young for him, though. They called him 'Luna', that's funny. And they knew what the boy was watching the house! I didn't realise that Aleal was so tiny. Can't beleive that his family would torment him like that. And now his uncle knows where the boy goes. Hope he keeps it to himself.