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A lot of stories I tend to skim through and not truly read all of it and only get to the good parts, but your story was actually one that captured my attention! That's says a lot for my short attention span. I thought your would be just another to skim through, but I actually started reading it and fell in love with it! I so feared that this was going to turn into the death flick and could only hope that Luke was the one who'd die cause if Alex had died Luke would never be able to live with himself. But I loved the ending! I don't cry often with stories sad or not, but your made me cry! I loved it! Personally I'd go back and deleted the author note chapter as its the one thing that annoys me most, especially with completed stories. But maybe you might consider a sequal. Have Alex teaching Luke to ride and having Luke take Alex. Just cause he can't come doesn't mean he can't do it anyway. Maybe in the sequal have a 2 men come in. One from Alex's past who was a friend of his brothers but always had eyes for him, now wants to break him and Luke up. With Luke his past still haunts him and sees a man that looks a lot like the man who kidnapped him. uh, I have more but that's all I'll say unless your more interested. misty-73@37.com

I can't believe you did that to me! I thought Alex died! I was so sad... That was mean. *grrr* BUt I forgive you since you gave it such a sweet ending.

very very very very good very nice story
keep on writng
bye bye

Mitts

You big meanie you! I fell for it too, until I read the last chapter....That was cruel....But I'm glad their story had a happy ending...lol
Well done...I've really enjoyed reading this one..

I am glad that your father is alright. Hospitals are not very happy places. *learned from experiance* Anyways, you did scare me on your last chapter! I thought Alex died! I even cried for him...*sniffles* Anyways, the perfect ending! ^_^ I can't wait until you upload another fic. I am looking forward to it. Don't forget to review mine! bye bye until you pop another fic out! *grins*

YAY!!!! I got my happy ending!!!!!

Sorry to hear about your dad, I hope he gets better soon.
Heart attacks can be scary, but with a good diet and excercise he should be able to recover and stay healthy. I'll keep you and your family in my prayers.(Hope you don't find that offensive.)

BAD BAD BAD AUTHOR!!!!
How could you!!! Ya can't kill him off like that!! It's... It's EVIL I tell ya!!

I'm watching you... this better have a happy damn ending!!

Loving the story.. but not liking the ending at the moment.
Good job though...

I'm waiting for the last chapter.

Flower,
Nicely done...soft smuttiness, but not too overwhelming for the 1st timers. I thoroughly enjoy shower scenes however, so your's must be good. I await the next entry.
Til then
Asyen

Oh WOW!!! ^0^ I so totally loved this story! Poor little Lukas ~a few tears~ He has been through so much. I really feel sorry for him. I am glad though that he has Alex. He seems like a sexy smart pistol that will love his with all his heart.^_^ I can't wait until you post the next chapter. Shower goodness is something to look forward to ~winks and giggles~

YLY: Scarlet Obsession

ok i dont to be a stickler for details but! if lukas was castrated is it possible for him to get an erection? i mean, its a great sex chapter and everything but if i were u i'd go back and redo the chapters and change the castrations to "almost catration" or just take it out completely. it was in the back of my head as i read this latest chapter! ^^; sorry! i dont want to make u doubt anything about ure writing but the castration thing is a big thing that might need to be changed.

but either way, its turning into a great story!!!:D