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person MarkDefranco

schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM

ChapterOne: Awww it makes me so sad! There are some things in this world that make my heart hurt just slightly, and this makes it happen. Beautiful, can't wait to read the next chapter

person MarkDefranco

schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM

chapterTwo: Ahhh, mischievous little boys, are they? I think they're cute, Kei is my favorite. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Update soon!

PS: I hate having to have an account to review

person monkiemanwoman

schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I HATE having to have an account to review! It's just more work ;-;

I like this chapter it is le cute, update soon

person Geddai

schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Wow.

That is one POWERFUL opening. I really liked it, and it's making me ache for more. Angst can stay, I rather like it

person Saratog

schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM

if that's not a way to start off a story, I have NO idea what is. Rain is so lovely, it is the best symbol of good things to come!

REbirth I say, REBIRTH

person Geddai

schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Awwww cuteness

I love it more than anything, though it's still a little sad. I love sad. Continue please please!

I can't wait until it's an actual story and not just introductions. update ASAP!

person tengo

schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Wow.

That's all I can say. What cute little boys! I want little boys like that! well... not little boys who are brothers who love each other, just little boys! Who.. love each other!

and stuff.

hard to explain

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