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for Eleven Forty Seven

by xxxpixie

person luck_eme
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 5

well, okay... =)

You do write well and your characters I love to hate, they're so mercenary.

Keep a goin', just letting you know I'm still reading.
person meg
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is awesome! Chapter three was great, I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Please update again!! This fic rocks!!
person jono
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hoooo shit that was nice. i like your long chapters. and sexy boys. Jason is awesome! YEAH BABY >:)

wait so is seb like a buff...gay...guy that tops? And eric is the bottom ._. cuz that would be interesting...and what does laced mean. in terms of drugs? yep thanks for updating.
person luckeme
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Read second and third chapter...or whatever, I guess what I read before was the prologue...but but...

It's still very well written and you have lotsa talent, but I want the angst back...

Is there a slight, tiny, miniscule fraction of a fraction chance of it?

If not, I understand, a story has to do what it has to do and some people cannot stand cutsey angsty comforting mushy stories.

I'll be keeping an eye on it...

You truly are a very good writer.
person jono
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liiiike it. so did he or did he not? THAT is the question...lol. update please
person luckeme
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing writing

I keep finding so many authors with talent here...

I love this story so far, but I do think you would get far more readers if you put it in the slash section.

I'm just glad I found it! I am totally intrigued and will be waiting for updates.

That was a long jump you took from hospital to courtroom. I would love more detail. But I suppose that's coming and I must wait patiently. *whines*

Thanks so much for sharing this.