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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This reads like an RP, the POV changes make no sense and it's really hard to follow. The style is awkward and childish with no sense of flow.
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have no clue how many gay football stories are out there. Story seems interesting though it would take a lot for it to be unique.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting start
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy the start of this story I hope to see more soon!
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start. I quite like it and i like the fact that Blake can stand up asshole loke Jimi.
Love it
Love it
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute, I'm liking this so far :)