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for The Demon Hunter Diary

by KingOfHearts

schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The descriptiveness, it's just... there are no words. Well, okay, maybe there ARE, but I can't think of any. Hell, you could probably earn a bit of cash by writing pro! Love the direction you're going with this, and like the allusion to "Life and Death" you put in there. Johannis is just fuckin' scary.
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, i really cannot believe how good this is. you pulled me right into the story immediately! this is the kind of enthralling storytelling you'd find in a george r. r. martin book. bravo, and i absolutely cannot wait for more!
person rayduke
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooOOOOOOOOooooooooo! Someone who has it planned out! Lucky. 5 years writing Surt's Forge, and I still don't know how it'll end.

Looks good so far, let's see what happens in the first scene!

Thanks for the review!

Peace and blessings
-The Psycho Duck