rate_review Reviews

hi there.

like your story so far, can't wait to see what's gonna happen !!

Elle...

You've got a very promising fic here. I'd really hate to see it cut short at all because of issues. Take it from another writer, the more crap going on in your life, nine times outta ten, the better your writing is going to be. The only problem I saw was the sudden change in Aurora. Yes, it's concievable that she would be worried about her friend, even still love her, but it's hard to believe that she would have suddenly filed for divorce when prior to that there were no signs that anything was wrong with her marrige or life. It would be really interesting to see you explore that a little more, give some back story to that.
But I really like it. :)
-Jessica

Good story! Keeping it going. Actually Im rather amazed that so few people have reviewed it. Maybe the rest just read it and wait anxiously for more. Don't stop writting.

i didn't think the chpter was too short, i rather liked the length and cutoff...but then again i can't write to save my life ^_^ i do wish you would continue it...:/

hmm i do like the way the story is going so continue it! it's great.

Well. If that is your first, it's a pretty brutal start. But if you add more into it (Like more Chapters) You may have one really good story :P

I really like this story, it's really quite interesting. I'd like to see what those two are planning lol, can't wait for the next update.