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Thank you for you quick updates.
I long for my Rosenbrim.

There will soon be the start of a war.
Great!
Stomerblad is really a wild dragon? lion?...(cause I don't want to use the word animal) ^-^ I'd like it when he does not consider Lord Scaller as his boss.
Yeah, I don't like conquer and being in organization, too, freedom is irreplacable.

Looking forward to see his confront with Rosenbrim?!-Morgan

Thanks Rudh.

Oh, oh...
I'm desperate for you update.

WOW,
I feel like I'm lovesick, waiting for new updates of HammerFall.
I have a feeling of who is that mysterious new general of Lord Scaller.
Don't laugher if I'm wrong, and don't mad of the spoiler if I'm right.
1. He has emerald eyes, and Rosenbrim has green eyes. Emerald = green, right?
The first Rosenbrim-Edgar, and his descendents have emerald eyes.
2. He has to wear helmet to cover his face, which means that face is known to many people.
3. Stomerblade thinks that Lord Scaller has to kill or nearly kill Rosembrin to get that necklace.
And I bet 1:10 that he will not. So he must be the owner of that necklace.
4. The first Stomerblad was mad in love with the first Rosenbrim. I guess that obsession still flows in the blood of the Stomerblad, the younger one has proved that already. Know comes the turn of the older.
5. He used to meet Dragon Lord, which means he used to attend important official meeting among the Kings of alliance
6. They both have slender hands (quite silly this reason, but still a reason)

Yup, what do you think?
Stephen wondered why a clever man as Rosembrin could fall into a mundane trap like that?
I guess he might not. Rosenbrim might intentionally be caught to get near and investigate Lord Scaller.
But he might not fully understand how strong and danger his enemy was.
And now, he was brain-wash. I guess.
Or who know that our Rosenbrim is still pretending?

No matter what I'm looking forward to see what will happen when Rosembrin meet Stephen if he is already changed.
And what older Stomerblade will do when he know the true man behind that helmet (handsome, of course).

PLEASE UPDATE!
Thank you.

Oh my god,

Yesterday night, I just visited your story and add a review, hoping you will understand my anxious waiting.
Like a dream, today I get the update.
I've not read them yet but well thanks a lot.

Chapter 16: Haha, as expected, Stomerblade is quite a sadist.
Chapter 17: The way king Stephen hide his emotion in court and only

shows his anger when alone is very realistic.
Chapter 20: Stephen was very cute and a little naughty when he was young

^-^.
I myself don't want to be a king, even if I could. So much restraint, unless

you are a tyrant.
Chapter 21: My, my, I've been waiting for this moment, my Rosenbrim,
so delicious in the hand of Lord Schaller (Hehe, I'm such a naughty girl)
Why he desires him so much? Interesting, interesting...
Oh, who is that mysterious man with the necklace?
Chapter 22: Yup, so Stomerblade family and Rosenbrim family have long

and old history together
Chapter 27: Our Rosenbrim is really so hot that everybody desires him.
Chapter 28: Oh, so Stephen cannot wait any longer in rescueing his

beloved.

Wow, that's all!? Huhu, so quick did I ran through all chapters.
Please update more chapters.
Tonight, I'll defintely dream about our Rosembrin, together with...? Who,

Lord of Schaller, Stephen, Stomerblade...? Anyone is ok...So sweet.

Wow, I read all the chapters of HammerFall at one time.
You are such a teaser (but you know, I love you so much!) when leaving a clift-hanging of Rosenbrim being caught up.
It's quite strange of me that I both like the strange and evil of Stomerblade and the tenderness and intelligence of Rosenbrim.
And I'm very curious about lord Schaller.
Will he be beutiful, cunning, smart? I'm sure he is.
But why a so strong and ambitious Stomblader agree to be under this lord Schaller'wing?
Please update the story, I feel like I'm in thirst of waiting for it.
A meeting between lord Schaller and Rosenbrim, I guess will be very exciting.
Ahhhhhhhh, Can't wait any more. PLEASE.
Do they have any relationship in the past?
And who will catch the eyes of Stomerblade (of course, I'm talking about the older brother) - the one who only seek for stronger opponent?
Anyway, thank you very much for your story.

Pretty good so far. There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, but they don't detract from the overall story. Some of the chapters feel a bit rushed - you might consider expanding them a little. But, it's enjoyable and I look forward to seeing where you take it.