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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read reviews so of course, I must leave another one...since I'm laughing
god, don't you just love teeta...and yes I confirm!! It feels like waving a white flag. LOL
You two are the absolute bestest...I swear...
god, don't you just love teeta...and yes I confirm!! It feels like waving a white flag. LOL
You two are the absolute bestest...I swear...
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marko-Jesse-totally-cute-yay-they-finally-did-it!
...yeah, sorry, I'm like the opposite of a romantic. My English teacher despaired over me when we were reading Romeo & Juliet (it's not love, it's just a crush). XD
More importantly: raping people in their home is a no-no! XD So I seriously hope Misha will be one time... because before, with him an Joni, it wasn't rape at all, that was non-con. Which is just fine. THX for the teaser!
...yeah, sorry, I'm like the opposite of a romantic. My English teacher despaired over me when we were reading Romeo & Juliet (it's not love, it's just a crush). XD
More importantly: raping people in their home is a no-no! XD So I seriously hope Misha will be one time... because before, with him an Joni, it wasn't rape at all, that was non-con. Which is just fine. THX for the teaser!
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there... I just wanted to review this after you set the teaser... can I plea in favor of Joni? can I? I mean he did cheat on Jesse and all, but don't harm him... too much... :D
All in all I love how the story has developed so far! Although I really had this inner desire of Marko being the top for once, after all the poor guy has been done so many times and used like an object too... but that's OK, it's you character after all :P so I respect whatever you have in mind for him and the rest...
and... can you give poor Marko lots of food? that damn Pete was starving the poor thing!!
that's all.. I hope my plea is heard, if not... I'll still avidly read every word, just because the story is damn good!
Laaerie
All in all I love how the story has developed so far! Although I really had this inner desire of Marko being the top for once, after all the poor guy has been done so many times and used like an object too... but that's OK, it's you character after all :P so I respect whatever you have in mind for him and the rest...
and... can you give poor Marko lots of food? that damn Pete was starving the poor thing!!
that's all.. I hope my plea is heard, if not... I'll still avidly read every word, just because the story is damn good!
Laaerie
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story ^_^
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I am the first person to review this time but ... busy, BUSY!
But let me quickly comment on this chapter.
Cute, that's the first thing that comes to my mind after reading it. I liked Jesse's hesitation, if he should wait or go away. The date was perfect, Marko's stunt with raising glass to that woman was hilarious and so was his remark about the people with big lips ... I laughed hard, reading this!
Oh I love this story more and more ^_^
Sorry it's so short but ... I just can't find words. A beautiful chapter, indeed! Thank you for it!
-E-
But let me quickly comment on this chapter.
Cute, that's the first thing that comes to my mind after reading it. I liked Jesse's hesitation, if he should wait or go away. The date was perfect, Marko's stunt with raising glass to that woman was hilarious and so was his remark about the people with big lips ... I laughed hard, reading this!
Oh I love this story more and more ^_^
Sorry it's so short but ... I just can't find words. A beautiful chapter, indeed! Thank you for it!
-E-
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, they're so cute together ^_^ I love Marko. At first I really did believe that he is the male version of Paris Hilton, but he got more...tragic now. Still he doesn't drown in self-pity. Very sweet :) Only...Jesse at the army? o.O Kinda...hard to imagine... *lol* Oh well. Lovely chapter! AAA
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW...in size 100 font.
You made that date so sweet, and I really liked it. Maybe this slow little romance is what they both need.
You updated fast, thanks for that and for this chapter, I smiled all the way through.
Love and hugs, K
You made that date so sweet, and I really liked it. Maybe this slow little romance is what they both need.
You updated fast, thanks for that and for this chapter, I smiled all the way through.
Love and hugs, K
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, You just made me very very happy! I really love them. Thank u for writing this!!
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
May, I just... say I love you!!!!! This story is so AWESOMEEEEEE!!! I was shocked to see reviews about you being a racist, well, I'm black and I didn't see anything racist in the story, but anyway... Just brush those haters away!!! Keep goin!!!
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, starting to like Vodka more and more. They're both crazy and perfect for eachother, hehe