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for Love and broken hearts

by Kiira

person Sobran
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is just so lovely. Spelling mistakes here and there but aside from that, excellent! Please update soon.
person kanjil
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you captured their feelings, how they got closer and opened up to each other despite their doubts and past events. And Marko's temperament again causes funny moments making me smile. Their mutual history makes their developing relationship even more intriguing to me and I believe that ,like Joni and Vodka, Jesse and Marko are very well matched. I hope to read more soon.
person Lisa
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love Jesse and Marko`s date-so sweet,hope they have many more!so cute together!
person jeazard
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First dates are awkward. Not that I have a lot of experience, but they just are. And I don't like it, probably because of a severe phobia of relationships, which might be why Misha/Joni works for me, there's no thinking and worrying and feeling insecure: Misha takes all that away.
Whah, here I go, talking about the couple that wasn't even in this part. Oh well, might as well continue: I can't wait for Marko/Jesse and Misha/Joni to meet. :D
person luckeme
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 20

you're making it rough to keep my image as the fastest updater. *grin*

which I don't mind in the least. I knew they'd be cute together. I want Marko to be happy so bad, and Jesse.

It was just too cute, well, not TOO cute,..toooooo cute. I loved it and they're bonding and that will make it harder for anything to come between them,

So is Pete gone? One can only hope he doesn't try to cause trouble.

I had this thought of Vodka and Joni and Marko and Jesse all out to dinner and Vodka trying to kept Joni in line...as he drools over the other two....hehehe...what? Joni torture is all good. Even though I like him. Alittle.

Well, loved that chapter, Kolgrim and thanks for writing it...love and hugs and all, K



person teeta
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I get to be the first again!

Ok, my comments, quickly because I'm busy, BUSY!

Another great chapter, as always. You're probably getting bored with this phrase 'great chapter blah blah blah' but it' true. Wish I could find better words. But I am not madlodger *sigh*

*chuckling* But I won an argument with a friend of mine who said Marko is going to top!

Ok, this is a crazy review so I better leave it like that, before it becomes some moronic monstrosity.

Loved it! Can't wait for another chapter, because it's going to be Vodka and Joni!

Lots of love,

-E-
person teeta
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dang, I was second ...
person teeta
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um, me again. Don't tempt me to throw a guess ^_^ because you know how well I can guess. Right, luck_eme? She can confirm, lol.

But a wish? Hmmmm ...

Nope, whatever you think up, will be good for me!
person luckeme
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't believe it!!!You put up more while I was reviewing. *bows*

OMG...so now comes the drama, I never saw this coming, not Pete going after Joni, and yes, I want Miska to save him in time from beating or rape or whatever, I think it will be humbling for Joni to need someone so much and a repair of his warped point of view about the world that someone actually would rescue him at risk to themselves.

I was wrong, not all torture to Joni is good, not that kind. Okay well there's my opinion and please update fast again, since that was a cliffy...a good one, too.

Thank you again!! I will thank you lots and mean every single one...love and all, K

person womo
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah...
it's so strange, reading this particular story, because the top/bottom roles are reversed and all. but it's good. pete is just a weirdo.