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for Love and broken hearts

by Kiira

person teeta
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I feel like the most terrible friend ever. I should be like ... the first reviewer here! But I got distracted, talking to my bro. I really had a good time, you know, talking to him, your wish worked ^_^

To the review, though ...

*mushy feeling* Um, yeah, the chapter was so good, so good. Misha acted like a real gentleman, rescuing the person he cares for. And how fierce he was, all wanting to kill that slimy Pete! Good he didn't, what would Joni do without him? And ... I like the fact that he took Joni with him from that flat, Joni would probably have it even worse if he stayed there for a night, regardless of with or without Misha. And you let us see Joni's more fragile side for the first time, the experience is definitely interesting.

Outstanding chappie, standing applause! Thank you ^_^

*hugs*

teeta
person Scribbles05
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww! Joni is finally starting to come around. He knew he couldn't resist Misha for long. I was so happy when Misha came in and kicked Peter and his slackers asses. I have no favorite couple I love them both and wish them all strong and long-lasting relationships. One question though: Are you going to bring Kim back into the picture? I'm sure he'd have a cow if he found out his secret (well no longer a secret) crush is now dating Marko--the so-called enemy in Kim's eyes.

You are so quick with your updates, you put me to shame! ;)
person Lina
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES!!! ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPPIE!!! I COULD JUST.... EAT YOU UP WITH CHOCOLATE!!!
person Laaerie
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! gawd if you keep updating this often I'll never get any work done :D Anyway... that was a very nice piece of writing, the way Joni finally let out some of his feelings was nice and not mushy :P It's good you can show Joni's good side too *grin* now... on so err... impatiently... wait for another update :D

Laaerie
person luckeme
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh the sweetness of that.. I read it twice.

The rescue was just so perfect. I loved it...loved it. I hoped others voted like me, and it felt like I helped shape the chapter and it just made it even sweeter, if that was possible.

And Joni thinking about Marko? Wow. He's getting, you know, nice. Misha has definitely been good for him, but I think he's good for Misha, too. You made two perfect couples.

Loved it. Did I mention that?

Well I did. Thanks.
person jeazard
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! If I had been that taxi driver, I couldn't have kept quiet I think. XD *hugs Misha* Hm, did I mention you chose one of my favorite names ever?
person jeazard
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, also:

Cecilia, reading a just recieved card: "Um, Jesse? Remember how I told you I set Joni up with that overly dominating uber top? The one that was supposed to teach Joni a lesson? I just got a thank you card from Joni." o_Ox
person Lisa
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joni!hope Misha will get back!Pete`s a pyscho,hope he doesn`t do anything to Jesse and Marko!
person Civako
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't stop smiling when I read chapter 20. So nice! *sigh* wish I was in love.. Anyways. Thank u very much for writing it....again!
person Nelzeben
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. This was so CUTE!! xD Aww... Jesse was so sweet and gentle ^_^ They really seem perfect for echother. Now I don't have to feel sorry for Marko anymore :)
Hm...one hand I hope Misha will be there in time, since I don't especially like rapes, but...somehow I wonder what Misha's reaction would be if Joni got raped. You write it the way you want to^^