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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 24
Hi, Kolgrim,
It's been a while since I reviewed this story, so I went ahead and reread it. It is even better the second time around. Not sure why that is. Maybe it's because I was not rushed by RL this time, or maybe all that editing you do. It looks like you are constantly improving:)
My favorite pairing is Vodka/Joni. Both guys are fairly experienced (in some areas:) and their relationship is like a powerful sexy dance. I love the fact that Joni became a bottom; every top has their top, so to speak. He was running around looking for it and finally met one. There is no way Jesse could of taken that role.
I guess, that this fic touches on a deep issue of 'why relationships don't work out'. Some people together are like a wrong combination, it takes time to find the one who completes a person.
Marko and Jesse are sweet, but they make me a bit sad. Both guys have been dominated by more powerful men. Their relationship experience is pretty limited because of it. Only now they are getting to explore 'the real deal' with each other. Like the first date and all the experimenting and friendship. I almost wish that they had gotten together back at school days. But it is more realistic this way.
This fic is much lighter that your usual style:) They came close to non-con a few times, but it didn't actually happen! Very good job on that. It might change now with Pete making his moves. And I keep wandering about Kim.
Love this story, waiting for updates with anticipation:D
Hi, Kolgrim,
It's been a while since I reviewed this story, so I went ahead and reread it. It is even better the second time around. Not sure why that is. Maybe it's because I was not rushed by RL this time, or maybe all that editing you do. It looks like you are constantly improving:)
My favorite pairing is Vodka/Joni. Both guys are fairly experienced (in some areas:) and their relationship is like a powerful sexy dance. I love the fact that Joni became a bottom; every top has their top, so to speak. He was running around looking for it and finally met one. There is no way Jesse could of taken that role.
I guess, that this fic touches on a deep issue of 'why relationships don't work out'. Some people together are like a wrong combination, it takes time to find the one who completes a person.
Marko and Jesse are sweet, but they make me a bit sad. Both guys have been dominated by more powerful men. Their relationship experience is pretty limited because of it. Only now they are getting to explore 'the real deal' with each other. Like the first date and all the experimenting and friendship. I almost wish that they had gotten together back at school days. But it is more realistic this way.
This fic is much lighter that your usual style:) They came close to non-con a few times, but it didn't actually happen! Very good job on that. It might change now with Pete making his moves. And I keep wandering about Kim.
Love this story, waiting for updates with anticipation:D
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thx for making Jesse and Marco so very happy! ^_^x
Also, neat link-included-in-email, has that always been there...?
Also, neat link-included-in-email, has that always been there...?
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet chapter :D I have a bad feeling concering Kim, though o.o I mean, Pete's a maniac anyway... *lol* No, but Marko's cute. Our male Paris Hilton *hugs him* Sorry, I'm feeling a little strange today xD Anyway, just know that I liked the chapter :D
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! You know I had pleaded for this one thing!!! and thank you!!!!!!!!!! hehehe... that's my review!
Laaerie
Laaerie
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Men, I really had to catch up again.. Still love the story and ofcourse the pairings. Very interested to know where this story will go to! Thanx!!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you know that this chappie is awesome ... and I guessed it once more, lol! Man, am I good at this! ^_~
Marko dominant! Yay! Poor boy, finally he ... hehehe! Sorry, I can't stop grinning here. He did well, really well!
And I see you mantioned that army sex we once talked about, after reading those stupid army fics, lol. Um, would be hot, seeing them both in uniforms. But don't make them cut hair so short, please.
Pete's trouble. Evil.
Want more Joni and Misha - and NO, not because I'm Vodka sometimes, just because the dynamics between those two is amazing.
Ok, loved it. You know that, right?
Hugs and kisses.
-E-
Marko dominant! Yay! Poor boy, finally he ... hehehe! Sorry, I can't stop grinning here. He did well, really well!
And I see you mantioned that army sex we once talked about, after reading those stupid army fics, lol. Um, would be hot, seeing them both in uniforms. But don't make them cut hair so short, please.
Pete's trouble. Evil.
Want more Joni and Misha - and NO, not because I'm Vodka sometimes, just because the dynamics between those two is amazing.
Ok, loved it. You know that, right?
Hugs and kisses.
-E-
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Just when I think it can't get any better, you just pull me BACK IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story, ::sigh:: If i could only steal you and milk you for stories!!!!!
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story! I was so hooked I found myself sitting and reading it till early morning. I hope you update soon. I'm really looking forward to reading some more. ^_^
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Jesse and Marko's relationship has got to be the sweetest I've ever seen.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, thy a lot! *hugs Misha* He's such a big teddy bear! ...well, a teddy bear with a cock, but whatever. XD
I also love Haywire btw, it's awesome!
I also love Haywire btw, it's awesome!