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for Love and broken hearts

by Kiira

person womo
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww...pete is just weird. he needs some serious help. great chapter!
person Seb
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. [: Vodka and Joni are adorable.
person Nelzeben
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...you like to see me suffer, don't you? Aw...poor Joni. Let's just hope Misha's going to be there in time to save Joni again. T.T I don't wnat to be in Pete's skin once Misha finds out, though o.o He can be happy if Misha doesn't kill him.
person teeta
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was looking forward to this chap, I was so curious about Joni's family. Up till now we knew him as a independent young man, only loosely connected to his family, now you allowed us to see him interact with his father, sister and even step mother. Glad he has them in his life ^__^

As to him and Misha, well, it was certainly fun, trying to RP someone totally drunk, not being ever drunk in my entire life, lol. I sincerely apologize for the silliness sometimes and thanks for allowing me to be Vodka once more. I don't know what I wil do when this story is over and I won't get to be him, he's such an interesting character.

Remember the other day when we were talking about our stories and the way different characters were developed? I love the way you write Joni; he changes from a cheating bastard to a fine young man who - if you only allow him - will have a good, fulfilling life. I remember at the beginning of the story I felt angry with his antics towards Jesse and I was a hardcore Jesse/Marko fan ^_^ but as you said, Joni and Vodka just stole the show for themselves :P

That was a stroke of genius when you decided to give Joni more than he had bargained for!

Ok, have to stop rambling incessantly. I loved this chapter and certainly look forward to the next one, curious what you'll do with that material ^__^

Till then, *hugs*

-E-
person Laaerie
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you! evil you! I know how this cliffie came to be! It was all Teeta, wasn't it?!!! :P evil!!! now I bet you'll have me waiting for at least a whole week, if not 2 to know more!!!!!!!! *cough* OK... so... evil cliffie, with evil people snatching the cuddly lovers off the bed.... muahahaha.... evil.

Laaerie
Coherent thoughts are on vacation, please call later :D
person vampcerrwiden
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Loved it! Can wait for the next chapter!
person vampcerrwiden
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kolgrim, would you mind if I did a drawing of Joni btw? I would love to do one and post it. :)
person jeazard
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh, found it without the email!

but... but... wait, you're hurting them, stop it! *points at misha and joni* they should be happy and together and have lots of hot sex. so? I sincerely hope you're going to fix this.

:P
~jea
person womo
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
marko/jesse sex! score!
person sabs
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey!! nice going really liked the 23rd chapter but i seriously wanna see more of joni n vodka i can't help it they r sooo hot together.