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I lost internet over the weekend so even though I read this earlier I wasn't able to review. Since this isn't the review after the read it might sound a little vague as I try to remember my firt impressions.I think the ch came off well I have to agree with Joni I didn't get the Irmeli joke. I figured it was one of your Finnish throw backs.LOL. I did however like the fact that Joni wasn't so happy about Marko and Jesse getting along. I hope they continue to be friends despite JOni.. I'm sure that will really piss him off.LOL

Wonderful hun. UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE THIS WONDERFUL STORY HUN...SOON AND ADD SOME SEX TO IT.

hahhaha this is funny, and starting to get really interesting!

i definitely saw the parts that you had problems with the translation but the point came across fine. I was a little confused byt hte ch because I couldn't figure out what was wrong with everyone probably just like Jesse. Maybe you'll explain the inside joke next ch? I wonder what could develop between Peter and Jesse...I mean it doesn't sound like Jesse has an issue with his age and Peter doesn't sound like that big a jerk like Joni. And speakig of Joni I bet the perv was really lapping it up seeing jesse and marko together!

oh lovely. :] i love kim! >w< he's so sweet and grawrrlkr;laldaldnas. xD but i liek the main pairing more. :/

this is really good so far, i hope you update soon!

Interesting, I would really like to know more about how Kim and Jesse became friends, as well as how Jesse ended up with Joni(^_^)

I can't help but want Kim to get Jesse. I know it's a bit of the cliche, rooting for the underdog, but can't be helped. Although I really do want to see how Joni will grow as a character as the story goes;P

I am really looking forward to Jesse's POV, I like to see what attracts him to Joni other than the fact that he's hot. Jesse seems like he's a bit naive, but than again that always makes character growth interesting:)

oh gosh can you say narcissist? Some one needs to bring Joni down some. I feel bad for Jesse stuck with an egotistical jerk like that. I mean he could be giving Jesse all sorts of diseases. Of course I would say I hope jesse ends up with Kim but I have to be mean and say that I want Jesse with some one cute and everything you have said about Kim so far doesn 't make him sound very attractive. i also wanted to commend you on your sex scenes. they are really hot! If I was a horny girl they might have had my left hand working over time. LOL! Of course I'm a goodie two-shoe so I can only envy you for having gone skinny dipping. All my friends talk about it and say it's really fun but I haven't had the nerve to yet myself.