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for Love and broken hearts

by Kiira

person Mayo
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i dont like kim anymore. >>;
XD
i like tuna sandwhiches tho. :)
person Yblue
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Jesse has a crush on Marko, I like that! I really like they’re getting to know each other, and I wonder what will happen if Jesse learns the truth about Joni. Well, Kim sortof said it already but I don’t think Jesse heard it, being too shocked and all… Tension is rising, I wonder what will happen now.
person womo
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! kim mako AND joni! Wow. he kinda almost has a cult following. GREAT chapter! can't wait fo rmore.
person Mike Conner
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...interesting...
so is jesse starting to fall for marko now?will marko have an affair jesses aswell as joni?all very interesting.i cant wait for the next chapter.eehh...someone should hang pete.lol
poor marko :(
let the boy eat.
person Cindyip
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, somehow ever since Kim found out about Joni, he has a edge of cynicism that is a bit off putting. While Marko is actually quite sweet, almost making me wish for a MarkoJesse, but I still want to see if JoniJesse can work out(^_^)
person Sekre
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh the drama x)

Marko is cute ... Though I still like Joni's cheating ass better xDDDDD
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Moreeeee please! I absolutely am addicted to this story!
person Cindyip
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, Marko sounds so Paris Hilton, spoiled and lazy but things always go his way(^_^)
person jono
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like your story, it's kind of humorous in a way and i like the plot! I think you've done a really good job on this one. Please update? I wanna know if Kim will tell Jesse. Ahhh Jesse is so adorably awesome and Marko reminds me of well...me sort of. HYPER! ^__^
person Yblue
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I really like Joni. I like how you go in the head of the one track minded, selfish asshole. After reading the last chapter, I hope Marko (and not Kim) will tell Jesse his boyfriend cheats on him. And then… *chuckle* Jesse returns the favor by cheating right back with Marko…

Ok, I guess maybe Jesse wouldn’t be that kind of person. And maybe Kim should tell him after all. I like how he starts being overly rude (be it in a helpless way) instead of silent and shy. I do hope you have a nice ending in mind for Kim.

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