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yeah they broke up! No I don't mean yeah in a bad way but I think that the fact he admitted that he was more hurt by what marko did than his own boyfriend implies that there is more there than we know. I do feel bad for marko though being snubbed like that after he was trying ot be the bigger man. I have to say you were able to make joni seem more sympathethic there at the end even though we all know he's a jackass. Also you were slipping some in this ch you finnish was coming through the englis, though it wasn't anything too major.

wow that was great. so much emotion, i loved it. My mind has all these questions now, like where he's going to go, and whats going to happen to marko, and what will joni do now that jesse is gone. on and on and on, more more more, i need more please, i'm so happy you did such an excellent chapter. please post more soon!

haha good storyl.but reflects on my personal life.haha
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You need to do that "add more chapters" thing cause this story is really good.
I can't wait to read more!!! I'm actually reviewing because I really want you
to hop to it and get more up here!!! Please oh please. I really wanna know whats
going to happen 'tomorrow' and all that jazz. Hurry Hurry. I really hope you're
not in writer's block!
Awesome story though, seriously.
~Kaylee

I'm soooo in love with your story! And this chapter made me feel all sorry for Marko... I'm really looking forward to the next chapter^^

Poor Jesse, he may be the same age as Marko but his innocence makes him so much younger. Interesting, that Marko has in him to be so noble, I wonder does Joni has the ability too? Or will he simply never learn(^_^)

I like how you capture Jesse's feelings and put them into the right words. Poor guy. Finally some punishment for Joni. I hope Jesse can forgive Marko for what happened, cause I really want to see the two of them get together.

Wow, this story is living up to it's title ... Joni is caught and though the guy is a whore, Jesse was pretty much willing to cheat too - I would say that I wouldn't think he's as bad as Joni, but I think they're pretty much equal on that scale, even though Jesse didn't really do anything. Joni has sex cause hes an addicted whore, not because he actually likes the person. Jesse wouldn't just cheat on Joni unless he actually cares for someone on an intimate level, 'cause I don't see him as the same type as Joni who sleeps around just for release. And then there's Marko who isn't a bad guy, just made a lot of bad choices and I doubt he'll be able to be a whore one day and be a good kid the next (much like Joni - Even if Joni and Jesse makes up, I'm not sure if he'll be able to calm down his sex drive). Then there's kim ... No matter what he's not going to find happiness in this twisted triangle and after all that stuff Jesse fed him about him being a great guy to be with and yadda yadda, I doubt he can take it when Jesse basically goes back on those words since he himself wouldn't give Kim a chance.

Lots of broken hearts here, and lots of love - Those were just my opinions from this point in the fic, so I dunnot if I hit the spot or that I'm way off ... Guess I'll find out as this fic goes on ^^ Lots of drama, love it!

please post more. This story is very good but i hate all the comparisons to women, its so sexist lol. Anyways post more soon please.

Aww poor Jesse! I'll snuggle with him! It's good that this happened so that the real meat of the story can begin but it's also sad that poor Jesse had to be disillusioned by love. I liked the way you got into the emotions swirling in both jesse and Marko's minds. Don't keep them Finnish folks waiting too long I heard those Vikings are somewhat tempermental.