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Ok, I shouldn't be commenting on part of this so I won't.

But on the rest ... I feel free to comment ^__^

Yes, Pete is evil and trying to mess with Joni. Oh, I do hope Marko will get back at him, together with joni, and with Jesse, I think. I don't know if they're going to involve Vodka in this - prolly not because Vodka would do something rush, he's like that ^__^

Anyway, yes, the chap is a good read, I liked it when Joni shouted at the police officers (it proves that he didn't become a total and weak bottom ^__^) and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

And now ... excuse me but Kay and Jatis are waiting, hihihi!

Pete's like...a real asshole. And a madman, too, they should arrest him o_o Huh. anyway. It's good that Joni's alright, more or less, at least... Haha, I always thought of Marko and Jesse as small and kinda fragile, too xD

aaaaaaahhhhhhhh noooooooooooo first of all *bows in apology* forgot to review last chapter!!! but anyway!!! it's not fair to stop there!!! I know how busy you are, but can't you type while sleeping?! hihihiih... Kidding! Kolgrim~~~ I hope you're better now~~~ all my good wishes go to your fast riddance of that cold! and truly I can't wait to see what comes of these four!!! Pete deserves to be buried in liquid - fast congealing - cement! Yesh!!!

HUGS!!!

Laaerie

Hi, Kolgrim. This is not a chapter review; someone brought it to my attension that there is a mistake in the story title. Sadly it's true. I've no idea how I havn't spotted it before. It should be:

Love and Broken Hearts

hearts is plural, it means more than one heart
heart's is a posession, something belongs to the heart, like: heart's desire. Desire belongs to the heart.
I am so sorry that I have missed this for so long. *slaps self*

Whoa! Bad! This calles for revenge!!!!! Damn it took me a moment to realise Vodka doesn't know Peter at all so he'll never find out what happened if Joni doesn't pull through. I want to punch the nurse who accused Vodka for being a rapist. Aaah poor Joni didn't deserve this. That was really a shock, him being stabbed like that, especially since it turns out to be so seious. Very unexpected and cruel... Hell I hope Pete will be found out and punished severely! I hope he gets gangbanged in jail!

hmmmmm....okay....scarey....but soooo not as scarey as me at 7:00AM\


from your loyal queen, imperial 13

O Ow...
Nothing gonna happen to Johnny right?
Although at the earliers chapters he's not being nice, but he really changed.
I hate that Peter character, hopefully someone beat the shit out of him

JOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:(

poor poor joni...pete you fucker. i hate pete. it's all his fault. he needs a life.

i hope vodka gets cleared. he needs to stop getting drunk. great update!!

Jesus, I feel really bad for Joni. After what he's been through I wouldn't be surprised if he got a little paranoid @.@ Poor Misha, by the way T.T Looks like he's in deep shit now xD

Geez, you're not supposed to hurt them like that! *shakes you* How would Joni have hot sex with Misha now that he's been stabbed any everything, did you think this through?
Okay, calm down, you probably have a plan. Also, good stories do not solely consist of porn, that's what makes them actual stories. Still. :P
*hands Joni a band-aid*