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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just kinda rushed through all 12 chapters (admittedly I had to get some sleep between 10 and 11) and now I owe you some serious feedback! XD I'll just leave the occasional mistake alone, I'm making them myself (and they always say English is such an easy language to learn).
Soo... I fell in love with the first chapter; from the summary one wouldn't have guessed that the first perspective you get is Joni, but you make it work (loved it XD). He's far from perfect but he has his own logic.
Funny enough, out of all the different perspectives Kim was the only one I couldn't quite grow to like (probably because I hate it when friends 'suddenly' go all loving on you, really tends to ruin things).
Right now I only hope that Jesse isn't going to do something incredibly stupid!
Can't wait to read on. ^^x
~Jeanne
Soo... I fell in love with the first chapter; from the summary one wouldn't have guessed that the first perspective you get is Joni, but you make it work (loved it XD). He's far from perfect but he has his own logic.
Funny enough, out of all the different perspectives Kim was the only one I couldn't quite grow to like (probably because I hate it when friends 'suddenly' go all loving on you, really tends to ruin things).
Right now I only hope that Jesse isn't going to do something incredibly stupid!
Can't wait to read on. ^^x
~Jeanne
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You captured the emotions in Kim´s and Jesse´s argument so well and the accidental meeting is a turn with a lot of possibilities. Please update soon!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You made my day with your update :) I just love your 'male version of Paris Hilton', he's totally adorable. Kim's starting to get a little creepy, though o.O Anyways, great chapter!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Marko, I hope he doesn't end up more fucked-up than he already is^_^;;
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. The way the plot evolves combined with the description of believable characters, their personal history and development is so awesome. Please update!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just found this story,like it!hope Jesse/Marko get together,they need each other!
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes,yes,yes..that's right! Jesse alone, Marko alone...hmmmmmmmm I like it....thanx!!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Marko, I so want to snuggle him.And I want to go to his place and personally kick his dad in the nuts! I hope Jesse is going to be at the club, otherwise Marko’s just going to score with a random guy and be even more miserable…
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!!! I'm so happy that updated! This was a good chapter, it was realistic and good. Love it! Now pleaseeeeeee don't make me wait as long as I did last time!!! *starts crying* Please! I..I... Just won't survive! hehe post more soon please....
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks like major changes for Marko(^_^)