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I know this sounds lame, but I haven't read any of the story yet.

I was just happy to find a new one by you so i clicked and added to favs and here I am with a review of just having a story of yours still to read. =)

Also, don't be sorry for 'just editing' and thinking you get people's hopes up of another chapter. I noticed that the best writers seems to play with and improve their stories alot, just means they're trying to make them better, even without updating.

Hope to start reading this one later. I'm probably the only idiot who reviews before they read. But..I'm excited.

Just read the whole thing this evening and I LOVE it! There's just something about it.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

you didn't update? why is up again? i'm confused.

CHAPTER 13
Did I neglect reviewing this wonderful story? Shame on me! It is very, very good. Jesse is a very romantic person, I think Marko is one too if he gets a chance and more selfconfidence. Wonder what Marko is going to do for a living. I don't like the idea of him becoming a hustler. Does'nt the boy have any skills to earn living. He might have but just have a low self esteem, seeing that he is from dysfunctional family. Both guys are going through growing up now and need to learn to take care of themselves. Overall this story is sweet and light and I like it a lot. Can't wait for updates on this one:D

Oh happy day! Wonderful update, I wish it could of been just a bit longer but it was still very interesting and fabulous. Thank you very very very much! I pray you will be updating again soon!

nicely done, now im hooked on your story! I hope you update frequently :) I love your chars especially marko and Jesse, and you have a nice dramatic script going here. And since your offering, you can add me to your mailing list

I like how Jesse discovers more and more good points in Marko´s character and I hope this increases the chances of them becoming a couple despite all the bad things that stand between them. Great chapter!

”Bunny, what's wrong?” Joni asked with a babbling voice, when I was walking past him.
“A bunny is up in your arse!” I snap and close the front door with a loud bang, after I've gotten in.

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OH MY GOD. That made me laugh like you wouldn't believe...xDDDD That is just...too funny.

I just finished reading all of it up to chapter 13. D: So sad...Part of me wants Jesse to get back together with Joni, but a small part of me wants Marko and Jesse to get together, too...I love this story. Love, love, love it.

“I’m going with them, to their hotel room, we’re going to have an orgy that will last long to the next day…. < >” That complete quote Jesse said to Joni made me laugh so hard I thought I was going to die. For a moment I thought I was reading ‘Skin flicks’ or something instead of your fic.

Lovely twist with Marko saving Jesse. I’m glad he did too. He’s really showing us all his good sides now. He’s cute and witty and caring. I’m sure they’ll make a sweet couple. Face it Jesse, Marko is your knight in shining armor, lol.