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You updated, and Marko and Jesse, cool(^_^)

Thanks a lot for sending me an email when you updated! I bookmarked the story, but I don't check it everyday. ^^x

Okay, I think we all waited for Jesse and Marco, although if you planned it from the beginning you should have made clear that Jesse's relationship with Joni would have ended eventually even without Joni cheating on him, because otherwise Jesse would hardly fall in love with yet another cheater, right?

The scene weher Jesse talks to his mother kinda bugs me; either bring her in or leave her out, but if you do want to write about her, descrobe her a little. What does she look like, not just her facial expressions but also her clothes (did she get ready for bed in the first place?). Also, her moodswitches a little fast. First she's angry with Jesse for coming home late, then she's all "I'll fix you something, sweetheart". You let her cry, but don't work with that anymore after that. Making your mother cry should make you feel guilty like nothing else, even if you got a lot on your mind.

All in all it seems to me like oyu kinda rushed this part, wanting to get the emo and angst over with to get to the part where Jesse and Marko can be happy again (which I must say is a good thing! Seriously!), but you got them into this mess, you gotta dig them out, bit by bit, don't hand them an elevator. ^^x

I'm looking forward to the next part, keep it up, but don't force yourself to write, it rarely has the desired result. ^_^x

~jea

I love Marko!

That was just so funny, putting on a show for that jerk of a father. I actually think he and Jesse make a decent couple, they seem to have traits that compliment each other.

The only thing that I can't fathom is what Jesse was doing with Joni. It's hard for me to imagine anyone nice, unless they are serious head cases, which he isn't, going for someone like him. I'm just glad he wised up and isn't with him anymore.

They like each other. I'm so glad. But I have this...feeling...you won't let it be that simple? =)

You update fast! I remember you saying you didn't, but seems to me you do! Anyway, LOVE the chapter and will keep my eye out for more, as usual.

Love, K

oh, btw, I was hit 4000. Wow. So many people love your stories!!

Thanks for the e-mail, I really like this story.
Yes! Jesse and Marko are going on a date, can't wait for the next chapter :)

aww great update! I loved it! right to the point, you did leave it on a bit of a cliff hanger though, so please don't take too long to update! that would be torture. but i got a real treat today, thanks a lot!

After finding this story, I checked to make sure you weren't hiding any others I didn't know about =)


I read four chapters. I never read a story before where I didn't like anyone! Leave it to you to think of something new...

Joni...typical a**hole, the type I always loved to spurn purposely.

Jesse...(getting past the name which is a dear one personally to me) is he clueless or what?

Marko...typical wannabe, rich boyfriend, doesn't care who he hurts

Kim...what keeps him with this group and with feelings for one of them? He has no dignity.

Pete...loser in big red letters on his forehead

That about sums up my take for now. It's so refreshing. Not what I usually read, that's for sure but you got me hooked on this bunch sort of anti-angst...does that make sense?

And of course, well written as is everything you write. I don't think it lost much in the translation, you amaze me with this being your second language, doing it so well.

LMAO!

chapter 5

I'd be that gullible, thinking I forgot someone, I've moved so much.

I also wanted to do what they did, pretend to know someone but never had the nerve to do it, loved reading it though...

I really, really like this story.

chapter 6-7

Now you did it, now I like Marko. Now I feel so sorry for him...

I wanted to keep not liking all of them, and I still don't the rest, but knowing you...*sigh*

I love this story.

I couldn't help it, I finished the story.

God, those guys are confused. I still like Marko and I like Jesse's sister, too. Oh and Pauli. You know what's funny? I find this story sort of hot even without sex. Strange.

Well done, Kolgrim. It ended up angsty after all, but that's fine, I do love that.

Thank you ever so much. It's like I can feel your heart in your stories...and you have a good one (heart that is) You really should think about writing something to publish and sell...