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Funny thing, I have a hangover from a good portion of Vodka and some Southern Comfort right now, puts me in the perfect mood for this chapter. Keep up the good work! :)

To the reviewer which has this racial issue. You refer to the almost rape on the beach. I also wished it had not had racial designated since there were no other blacks within the story. The last almost rape only makes issue of fat and ugly. There are nicer ways of telling people when anything bothers you. If you read the stories Kolgrim writes down you would be able to tell she would not offend anyone on purpose and to tell her nicely would have been enough. She didn't relise I'm certain. If it means so much to you hold your emotions in and state the facts and give people the credit that they will listen.

I find this to be a excellent story and sorry to the writer for putting this here. I am eager for many more chapters.

AAAH, What goes around, comes around, haha. That's very clever of you. I like it. Let Vodka be the boss of Joni so that Jesse can be with Marko, *grin* Thanx!!!

Let me first acknowledge, I was wrong for leaving such a strong negative review of your work. I am the anon reviewer that left the review of about the 'supposed' racism. I have not read the responses. I expect that they castigate me, as I am sure I deserve to be castigated. I really do not need to read the reveiws to know I was wrong for leaving such a review. I do not take back my discomfort with your use of race in this story. I am uncomfortable with it, and will remain so. I do take back all insinuations and accusations of you having racist tendencies. I truly am sorry for my unnecessarily harsh accusations. You need not accept this apology, because saying 'I am sorry' does not always make everything better. However, I apologize whole-heartedly for having taken my general discontent with the way race is treated in many AFF stories out on you. I am sure, you did not and do not deserve such treatment. (Even if you do deserve such treatment, it is not my place to treat you that way.) I am sure your stories are wonderful, as I am sure your reveiws indicate.

So, please, disregard my review, as I hope you already have. I am not in a position to judge you or your work. So, although I take back all that would make my review a "flame." I do not take back my discomfort with how race appears in your story. But I am one person, and my opinion should not mean that much to you.

(And yes, I am the original anon reviewer, not a friend trying to make you feel better.).

Very sincerely sorry for being an insensitive ass.

Ok, this time without the game of "Guess who I am", hehe, though it was fun!

Now what do I think of this chappie? HEHEHEHE!!! It was hilarious, seriously! I cracked up so much, you wish you could see me when I was reading the scene when Joni was wailing after his lost cherry! (inserts evil cackle here) Preciousss!

And I like Vodka! He is ... well, exactly what Joni deserves. Although for the time being I don't think Joni deserves anything, much less such a guy, gorgeous and all. But Vodka will teach Joni respect and - hopefully - being more faithful. Oh, I have to read tyhe next part of this chapter. Can't wait for it!

Hugs and kisses,

-E-

Oh god Kolgrim, I can't believe how many times I burst out laughing. No, not your liver, your cherry...(then for some reason I had this picture in my head of liver on a plate with cherries on it...ewww)...does your father often stare at your arse...mental note...etc etc...among other lines too numerous to write here.

So you managed to make Joni sort of cute in this chapter. Vodka, now there's a guy that Joni needs and I can't wait to see how that plays out...

I so loved this chapter and it didn't have Marko in it!

oh yeah, I have also been with the wrong guy many a time, I just never slept with them...lol...before I realized, so I guess it's the same, a gay friend of mine told me the only reason most guys don't have sex multiple times a day is cuz most are with girls and they won't let them...*snicker*

Thanks, love and hugs, your devoted fan, K

Oh, the arrogance! *laughs* Joni's so arrogant, it's funny xD Well, but Cecilia can't be so bad when Vodka really is that hot - he is a little crazy, though. Joni can be happy that he didn't get raped...(thanks a lot for that, by the way, because I don't enjoy reading rapes very much)
But these two, Joni and Vodka, are just...love. Especially together ^_^

CHAPTER 15
I liked this! I agree on bringing in angst, because Pure Fluff, in my opinion, does not work for good fiction. Fluff/Angst does, Fluff/Humor might, but Pure Fluff is definetely out. (I don't actually beleive that we'll see that from you, Kolgrim, knowing your other work:) ' Love and broken heart's' had angst from the chapter one, the first line was: "I hate big super markets; I hate them!" A-hahaha.

This chapter was non-con, well done in a fluffy way. So, Joni went from BEING a sex-stalker for Jesse to HAVING a sex-stalker of his own. It's the role-reversal, big time. He seems to like it, though. Well written and I agree with luckeme, it was cool even though it didn't have Marko in it.

I really like the fact that you develop all your main characters and not just one. It makes their interactions much more interesting. In 'Silent' that backstory on Jean's life made me look at later chapters in a different light.

The line: 'This is not how my home smells like…' made this scene so vivid in my mind, for some reason. And when Joni was affraid of 'fat bastard taking his cherry', well, remember Fat Bastard from Austeen Powers? I was laughing so hard, yeah. Love Vodka so far even though he is a stalker. And what is it about 'his friends'? Is he in a Mafia or something? Or it's all talk?

Love this story, Kolgrim:D
Thank you

CHAPTER 14
This fic is the cutest one, it is really sweet. Those young guys are so immature, I was laughing at them jumping on the bed. Good thing that Jesse came to see Marko, I don't think that Marko would of done it himself.

Yeahhh so great!! thanx!!