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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter, oops, forgot to check...
Well, not like my minds working or anything.
I have to say, that pipe checking line? *snort* I'll never look at repair men the same again, and it s all your fault if they see me blush or laugh for no reason...
You rule, seriously. This power struggle, it's so fun. And Joni's right, they are very much the same, except Vodka has more scruples. I love how sure of himself he is, how he lets Joni test the waters of his..umm, bottomness? Submissiveness! That's the word. Okay, I got to love these two together. I *&^&%^*& DO NOT want to admit to liking Joni, but...*tiny letters*... I do.
I was so damn sure when I started reading this I wouldn't like any of them, esp Joni, but now I like all four. I admit it. *hangs head*
Thank you Kolgrim, so sweet , so hot and so funny. There is a patience to your writing, like teeta's that I envy greatly. Marko and Jesse back...can't wait. hugs and love and all mushy stuff, K
Well, not like my minds working or anything.
I have to say, that pipe checking line? *snort* I'll never look at repair men the same again, and it s all your fault if they see me blush or laugh for no reason...
You rule, seriously. This power struggle, it's so fun. And Joni's right, they are very much the same, except Vodka has more scruples. I love how sure of himself he is, how he lets Joni test the waters of his..umm, bottomness? Submissiveness! That's the word. Okay, I got to love these two together. I *&^&%^*& DO NOT want to admit to liking Joni, but...*tiny letters*... I do.
I was so damn sure when I started reading this I wouldn't like any of them, esp Joni, but now I like all four. I admit it. *hangs head*
Thank you Kolgrim, so sweet , so hot and so funny. There is a patience to your writing, like teeta's that I envy greatly. Marko and Jesse back...can't wait. hugs and love and all mushy stuff, K
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just to get this out the way, I myself am a black male from the south and once reading that attempted rape chapter, it kinda shook me a bit. The “Marko and those black guys?” comment and the “Shut up whitey, I know you want this…” kinda unnerved me. But with you being from another country and race not being a big deal where you are, I totally understand your confusion with what was the big problem. Racism is VERY tender where I live and that’s the explanation for my reaction. With that said though, my love for this whole story overshadows that small section of your one chapter and I will continue to read it until the end and will read your next story too!
Now, I’m done with that. I loved this chapter. Joni and Vodka are becoming my favorite pair. It was SO well done and I'm eager to read more.
Now, I’m done with that. I loved this chapter. Joni and Vodka are becoming my favorite pair. It was SO well done and I'm eager to read more.
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vodka does seem to have quite some self-confidence himself xD But he's not as arrogant as Joni is, luckily. (Okay, that's kinda impossible, anyway^^) It's great we got to know what actually happened that night! I think I like Joni being submissive :D I simply adore Vodka. I mean, the name alone - how cool is that? And he does live up to it :D I'm rambling, I'm sorry^^;
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17
so Joni's a closeted bottom...well, used to be. *smirk* He's actually appealing when he's drunk, you know, needy I guess and wanton.
Vodka, what a guy. Can't not love him, keeps his head and who he is under all sorts of duress.
This was a long, juicy chapter, I know some was a repeat cuz of the other pov but really I like how long it was. Damn, I wanted a cold shower by the time Vodka gave up and went to sleep. *grin*
Vodka with an attitude and a set of keys. Joni tormented is fine with me, I'll never really like him, but he makes a very interesting and hot character, doesn't he?
What a great chapter.
You did a really good job building up the tension and then, you rat, made us wait. I forgive you, didn't have to wait long and I sort of liked that when it did happen Joni was back to his annoying self.
Still have Jesse and Marko to work on. I miss them alot!
You're wonderful. Thanks and hugs. K
so Joni's a closeted bottom...well, used to be. *smirk* He's actually appealing when he's drunk, you know, needy I guess and wanton.
Vodka, what a guy. Can't not love him, keeps his head and who he is under all sorts of duress.
This was a long, juicy chapter, I know some was a repeat cuz of the other pov but really I like how long it was. Damn, I wanted a cold shower by the time Vodka gave up and went to sleep. *grin*
Vodka with an attitude and a set of keys. Joni tormented is fine with me, I'll never really like him, but he makes a very interesting and hot character, doesn't he?
What a great chapter.
You did a really good job building up the tension and then, you rat, made us wait. I forgive you, didn't have to wait long and I sort of liked that when it did happen Joni was back to his annoying self.
Still have Jesse and Marko to work on. I miss them alot!
You're wonderful. Thanks and hugs. K
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heyy !!! great story but seriously i m addicted to vodka n jonis character, so again good work n further hot stories of both joni n vodka pleasee.
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want more Joni and Vodka!
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All hail master Vodka taming Joni! They really do make a lovely pair, lol.
Ok, I’m still eager to find out who you’re going to put on top in the Marko/Jesse pair, but honestly I wouldn’t mind to read more Vodka/Joni either. Can I have Mika then? He sounded kinda cute ^^
Whatever you come up with next, I’m sure it will be great. Looking forward to your next update…
I always have something to say about everything, so I’m going to react to the racist accusations as well: I completely agree with every one else who reacted to that flame. To the anonymous person: I think that if you have something to say that really matters to you, you don’t hide in anonymity. It is shameful you try to make others feel bad about something they obviously did not intend. Apparently you associate black men with being a rapist, even describe it as ‘typical’. I think that says something about you, and not about the author of this story. In other words YOU are the one separating races, making links we do not see. If you go look for it I’m sure you can find something racist in every story, including mine.
I’m not saying racism doesn’t exist over here but we Europeans are not used to having to be THAT careful with description of skin color. Racism has little to do with actual skin color anyway. The authors here on AFF write stories for your entertainment, did you really think we want to send secret racist messages? Puh-lease! I’ll let you of the hook because you apologised, but I swear Kolgrim’s next flamer gets a ritual curse on his ass, I mean it!
Ok, I’m still eager to find out who you’re going to put on top in the Marko/Jesse pair, but honestly I wouldn’t mind to read more Vodka/Joni either. Can I have Mika then? He sounded kinda cute ^^
Whatever you come up with next, I’m sure it will be great. Looking forward to your next update…
I always have something to say about everything, so I’m going to react to the racist accusations as well: I completely agree with every one else who reacted to that flame. To the anonymous person: I think that if you have something to say that really matters to you, you don’t hide in anonymity. It is shameful you try to make others feel bad about something they obviously did not intend. Apparently you associate black men with being a rapist, even describe it as ‘typical’. I think that says something about you, and not about the author of this story. In other words YOU are the one separating races, making links we do not see. If you go look for it I’m sure you can find something racist in every story, including mine.
I’m not saying racism doesn’t exist over here but we Europeans are not used to having to be THAT careful with description of skin color. Racism has little to do with actual skin color anyway. The authors here on AFF write stories for your entertainment, did you really think we want to send secret racist messages? Puh-lease! I’ll let you of the hook because you apologised, but I swear Kolgrim’s next flamer gets a ritual curse on his ass, I mean it!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God. I love them. I love this story. xD
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 16
'who wants more Joni and Vodka?' I do, me,me,me!
Hey, Kolgrim, this last chapter was so hot that I went ahead and reread 1/2 and 2/2 again. That was really well written, you grow as a writer for sure:)
I wonder about Vodka and his reasons, though. I mean, he is a friend of Jesse's sister, right? He never met Joni before she asked for his help and pointed him out. Why did Vodka agree to do the revenge thing? He could of said no. I wonder if he liked Joni and now got an adgenda of his own. I don't beleive that he is always so rough, either. This reminds me of 'Taming of the shrew' sort of.
Nothing can be hotter then two hot men wrestling on the floor, trying to get an upper hand!
'who wants more Joni and Vodka?' I do, me,me,me!
Hey, Kolgrim, this last chapter was so hot that I went ahead and reread 1/2 and 2/2 again. That was really well written, you grow as a writer for sure:)
I wonder about Vodka and his reasons, though. I mean, he is a friend of Jesse's sister, right? He never met Joni before she asked for his help and pointed him out. Why did Vodka agree to do the revenge thing? He could of said no. I wonder if he liked Joni and now got an adgenda of his own. I don't beleive that he is always so rough, either. This reminds me of 'Taming of the shrew' sort of.
Nothing can be hotter then two hot men wrestling on the floor, trying to get an upper hand!
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha, getting a taste of his own medicine? :)