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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey really awesome story but seriously the best part was of joni n that guy vodka really hott so please continue with their hot chapters.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey really awesome story but seriously the best part was of joni n that guy vodka really hott so please continue with their hot chapters.
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, um... yeah, me again. Because I felt like reading the last chapter again. o_Ox And because I wanted to point out my favorite part:
"Wider, please," I instruct with a lust-filled voice.
He looks like he really hates himself when he does it.
"You see? You really have it in you,"
These thre lines are awesome! XD
Also, the only part I don't really like is when Misha tries to be intimidating by mentioning his friends - that's sorta lame, he doesn't need that. ^^x
"Wider, please," I instruct with a lust-filled voice.
He looks like he really hates himself when he does it.
"You see? You really have it in you,"
These thre lines are awesome! XD
Also, the only part I don't really like is when Misha tries to be intimidating by mentioning his friends - that's sorta lame, he doesn't need that. ^^x
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading about their games very much, but I also liked the serious moments. It was always believable that Joni has this submissive streak and that he is discovering it just now with Vodka, as well as Vodka coming to the conclusion to keep and tame Joni until he is faithful to him. Please update soon. And I look forward to reading a story by you two.
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know wether I should curse or thank my exams - curse because they made me almost miss Misha and Joni, thank because this way I could read it all at once. SO MUCH LOVE. Okay, gimma a minute and I'll try to form actual sentences that don't solely consist of the words HOT, OMG and MORE. Because those are the first few things on my mind.
Right. These few chapters made me laugh, especially Cecilia getting Misha to accept her challenge. She was so obvious that I have to blame it on the alcohol. The fact that Misha accepted I blame on Joni being hot. XD
I'd like to use this opportunity to mention that I LOVE possessive relationships.
You outdid yourself on these last chapters, they are seriously awesome! The rush of former chapters is gone, you take your time, even write the same scenes from two different point of views - which is different to do while keeping the reader interested - and you managed it so very well! *is thrilled* Plus, the sex is fantastic. *fans self*
I didn't read the other reviews, so I don't know what exactly those flamers had to complain about, but racism? I'm with you, Americans apperantly are over sensitive. But think that is bad? Try living in Germany. *rolls eyes* I actually find it refreshing when an author doesn't strife to be 100% pc with every sentence, especiialy in a story that's written from a character's point of view. That being said, I still don't see where exactly there should have been racism. o_Ox But hey, what do I know. Is it really that bad to write someone's "black"? So the pc term is afro-american, what if he's european? Afro-european sounds stupid, no offense. XD
One last thing: you write this in Finnish first and then translate it, right? WOW. I couldn't bring myself to translate my German stuff, and as far as I know Finnish is very different from English, more so than German anyway. Agglutinative languages are said to be hard to learn, *pokes Japanese*, but I'm getting curious. What's Finland like? Mind adding a few describtions or something to the story, for those of us who've never been there?
Thanks once more for writing this wonderful story and also for keeping me up to date via email. ^_^x
*hugs Misha*
Right. These few chapters made me laugh, especially Cecilia getting Misha to accept her challenge. She was so obvious that I have to blame it on the alcohol. The fact that Misha accepted I blame on Joni being hot. XD
I'd like to use this opportunity to mention that I LOVE possessive relationships.
You outdid yourself on these last chapters, they are seriously awesome! The rush of former chapters is gone, you take your time, even write the same scenes from two different point of views - which is different to do while keeping the reader interested - and you managed it so very well! *is thrilled* Plus, the sex is fantastic. *fans self*
I didn't read the other reviews, so I don't know what exactly those flamers had to complain about, but racism? I'm with you, Americans apperantly are over sensitive. But think that is bad? Try living in Germany. *rolls eyes* I actually find it refreshing when an author doesn't strife to be 100% pc with every sentence, especiialy in a story that's written from a character's point of view. That being said, I still don't see where exactly there should have been racism. o_Ox But hey, what do I know. Is it really that bad to write someone's "black"? So the pc term is afro-american, what if he's european? Afro-european sounds stupid, no offense. XD
One last thing: you write this in Finnish first and then translate it, right? WOW. I couldn't bring myself to translate my German stuff, and as far as I know Finnish is very different from English, more so than German anyway. Agglutinative languages are said to be hard to learn, *pokes Japanese*, but I'm getting curious. What's Finland like? Mind adding a few describtions or something to the story, for those of us who've never been there?
Thanks once more for writing this wonderful story and also for keeping me up to date via email. ^_^x
*hugs Misha*
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! great chapter, again. it was cool seeing the diff povs...joni seems more cuddly now...for some strange reason.
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was totally cute :D I mean how Vodka does care about Joni is just...awwww. The forgotten condom was just too funny^^ I loved how shocked Vodka was and how afraid to get a 'funny disease' xD That was just great. Sweet chapter and I'm looking forward to read about Marko and Jesse again :D
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cecilia's and Vodka's point of view complete the picture wonderfully. How first Vodka is manipulated by Cecilia and then Joni by him made me laugh. It's made understandable how he falls for Joni despite his reservations. You two did a great job.
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm back! Finally I can review!
So ... I loved the bit with Joni as a slave! I couldn't stop laughing when he said that sentence: "Are you pleased now master? Should I lick your feet master?" It was so priceless!
And you really made Misha a great master *grins* I wouldn't have done it better myself.
But my absolute favorite line was: "No need to worry sir, your son’s pipes are now properly checked." God, the images it caused ... HAHAHAHAHA!
You are officially a goddess!
Ok, so now we get to read a bit of Marko and Jesse ... can't wait to read it!
Lots of love and everything that makes a writer happy (especially the reviews from you know who - and NO, I don't mean HER! From our favorite reviewer, in fact, you should know it by now ^_^)
-E-
So ... I loved the bit with Joni as a slave! I couldn't stop laughing when he said that sentence: "Are you pleased now master? Should I lick your feet master?" It was so priceless!
And you really made Misha a great master *grins* I wouldn't have done it better myself.
But my absolute favorite line was: "No need to worry sir, your son’s pipes are now properly checked." God, the images it caused ... HAHAHAHAHA!
You are officially a goddess!
Ok, so now we get to read a bit of Marko and Jesse ... can't wait to read it!
Lots of love and everything that makes a writer happy (especially the reviews from you know who - and NO, I don't mean HER! From our favorite reviewer, in fact, you should know it by now ^_^)
-E-
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still like your story but Joni and Vodka are not my favorite pair...sorry:) so I kinda rush through it when reading it. I do like that Joni is put into place for once! ha, serves him right!! Thanx!!