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for Touch of Evil

by Riot Storm

schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. The language is amazing. There's a few minor grammatical mistakes in there, but even I can overlook them (which is saying something).

You manage to inject just the right amount of cliché. You play in some obvious stuff (like the little girl trap), but never does it get remotely cheesy. That's quite a feat.

I am definitely looking forward to what the Sisterhood has in store for Captain Ultra. (insert evil laugh while looking hot).
person BZLF
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, it took along time, but another interesting chaptor.
Although I can't help but wonder how long it will be before he finally gets some.
person ruleroftravels
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg please continue! so good! your writing is phenomenal!
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has definite potential. Please continue. ^_^
person Vanessa
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I'm really into the superhero genre and this reads like it could've been written by a writer for D.C. I can't wait for future chapters.
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a superhero category? This is new... and its fun! good story, really did feel like a super hero comic, nice work. I await for further chapters. Hmmm.. maybe i should start working on a little super hero fic of my own... hmm...
person BZLF
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Well writen. Diffently like a Comic book or Super Heroe movie.
Goodjob, and I await the next chaptor.