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for Just About Soccer

by Nediar

person Arra
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update? I'm DYING for an update here. Seriosly. I know there's only been five days since I read it, but I can't stand it any longer. I've been lurking around here every day since, seeing if you have updated. I want to know what happens next. Because I love this. I love it to bits. It's so well written. PLEASE UPDATE. :(
person Arra
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! Please update soon!
person madlodger
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is just so romantic. The age of discovery and first crash. Hope our boys will get to kiss soon;)
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the tension! i love this fic!
person Jell-O-lover
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Confrontation!!!! :) Nice development. I like how it turned out.Has Brian told anyone about he prefernce since he still seems wary of others knowing?



person Jell-O-lover
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love your story...but isnt Ray a little too naive and brian too conidant(considering it seems no one knows??)
person madlodger
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 3
Hi, Nediar, really cute story, thanks for an update. We need more stories about sports and slash for sure:) I wonder how being on a same team can affect romantic development, I mean the innerteam politics or one player being better then the other.
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay yay yay!
person angel
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TENSION!!!! love it so far
person scitzo101
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whimper*more pwease i really really reaaly like it so PLEASE?????