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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay gotta say have been meaning to read this for a while and then I start reading it and its to good to not finish. I love the characters, I love the drama with the families and I absolutely LOVE the ending where they get to be happy together.
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read all 15 chapter on just a couple of hours. Great job you really heald my interest even without geeting to deep into the sex
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the hell was all that about?
What is Ray doing? playing with Brian's feeling?
Is he really confused?
What is Ray doing? playing with Brian's feeling?
Is he really confused?
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I :heart: this story.
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, rally don't like his father. Update soon!
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't able to review last time because it said only logged in users could, and I'm not registrated here so. Anyways, both chapters were excellent, as per usual. I'll be waiting for the next!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Nediar,
love your story, it's pretty cute:)
HAPPY NEW YEAR
love your story, it's pretty cute:)
HAPPY NEW YEAR
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wanted to wish you a merry christmas and new year.....and whatever else you might celebrate :)
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank god, you updated! That's a really nice Christmas present. Now I've got something to do during my holidays. ;) This sneaking out at midnight thing is really funny, I hope Ray's dad won't find out. Well, I guess he will, huh? Oh no, poor boy. But at least he got together with Brian (more or less), their a cute couple.
So keep going, I loooove your story! *g*
Oh, and good luck for your final exams! ^^
So keep going, I loooove your story! *g*
Oh, and good luck for your final exams! ^^
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:) hey!!
hahaha...sneaking ouT!!! i just hope nothing too bad happens to him when his dad finds out...cant wait for them to meet up at the pitch :) o btw i was looking back and i havent really noticed what each of them really looks like...
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hahaha...sneaking ouT!!! i just hope nothing too bad happens to him when his dad finds out...cant wait for them to meet up at the pitch :) o btw i was looking back and i havent really noticed what each of them really looks like...
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