rate_review Reviews

Waaaaaaaaaaaaah! I really liked this! I don't understand poker at all but DAMN this was great! I need mooooooooore<3

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You better remember that this story exists.
Or else.
I may have to eat your brain.

*growls* I'm about to just log in cuz typeing out my whole name is getting ridiculouse.... Anyway, this story is grteat and I would really like to see where it is going. so please, do add more chapters to this, please? It was a wonderful though short-so-far read ^^ please make it longer?

Through out the whole card game I was soo confused. I had no idea what was going on. All I know how to play in card is like Go Fish and War and BullShit. And I think BlackJack too.

That was awesome! You're a greeeat writer! Please continue! I'm looking for a great story and, well, I think I've found it :). I can be patient... But I'd love it if you updated ^^

This was a great start to a story. True, I didn't understand most of the poker mumbo-jumbo...I still enjoyed the story quite a bit. And am looking forward to reading more.:)

I love your style. Can't wait until the next chapter comes up!

You need to update. And type fast. The Dorito commercial is on. And i'm hungry. Um.

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YO! I think your story's pretty interesting i have absolutely no knowledge about poker but i had fun reading it. You seem like you know your stuff so YAY! And i like Kevin, he seems really cute ^^ And what the heck happened between Brandon and Jase (btw Jase is an AWESOME name u love it)? did they have a sexual past? Did Brandon rape Jase O_O!?!?! Omg that's horrible! Ok i'm gonna stop assuming like an idiot and i'll just wait until you update. And you better too! *holds out a plastic spoon* OR YOULL WISH YOU WERE NEVER BORN! :) Thanks!

Yes, please continue this. You have a gift for dialogue and detail. I'd been wondering if Brendan and Jase had a sexual history and I'm still wondering, lol.