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for Not Quite Sadism

by televisedgods

person dragon_moon
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this had me doubled over laughing!!! This was a brilliant story!!!
Absolutely fantastic!!! God you're a brilliant author!!! -cheeky grin-
Keep up the good work!

-wink-
x
person FlamesEmbrace
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. :3
person Saminada
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O__O Muahahahaha!!!!! That was soo cool!!! I liked it alot!
I can't wait to read some more! Gosh! I wonder what will happend to them from now on?
hummm...
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start :)
person Shota
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully I can stop laughing long enough to write a proper review. I'm not sure who to feel more sorry for. Gabriel has serious issues. An excorism like that would make one hell of a movie. This is the funniest thing I've read all day. I loved it!
person Macha
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where's the next chapter?! :) I definetly like where this is going.
person darkangel1210
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't quite know what to make of this...

Maybe it's because I'm not fully awake from a day of hot, sticky weather and lots of water.

It's good though. Please carry on writing because I want to see what else your crazy mind can come up with :)

darkangel1210
person Jenna T.
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! That was so fucking hot with the excorcismsdis stuff. GOD! That was hot. This would be the beginning to a GREAT story! I reallllllllyyyy hope you continue this. Or atleast a short sequel!
person L.S.
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww i don't know if you meant this to be cute, but I love it!! hahah like...AW!!! ^^ I cant wait to see where you'll take this (if you'll take it further, which i HOPE you do!!) ahah it's wonderful!!
person Kikvws
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO. This is awesome. More please!

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