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It is an excellent day when i find that you have updated darkness. One problem i found, when Okashi and Lloyd are talking by Lloyd's window and Okashi says “I don’t want to evolve you in this", did you mean involve? Other than that this is a class act story. I do like the mystery you kept in the new charecters. Sorry about getting the first and second chapter mixed upoftheold story.With my head it wasjust oneofthosemoments when you find that you left the cabinet door open by use of the fore-head, but all is better now and thanks for the concern. I love the new dynamics between Okashi and Kyouji, unless those are old and my head isn't recalling your story's again. Ah well, still a good read and it is good to see another update.

I like it. It's interesting and makes me curious to see what else you do with it. I hope you'll continue it.

I have an interest for boys in institutions as well, heheh. But it's fun when there's more going on than meets the eye.

And I'd like to learn more about his little friend. So please keep going! ~Lys

Oh, you have another chapter up. Didn't notice, sorry!

But that answers some questions. Anyway, hope to see more soon.

I really enjoyed this story. Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens.

Thanks!

darkangel1210

Yo! It is a month and a day since I last checked up on you, and I must ask: WHERE ARE YOU!?!?! >=O It would be nice to know if you're alive once in a while, ya know. heheheh. =P Well, update, email, do anything to let me know you still...<=( *sniff* care about us *sobs*. ;__; Wow, I'm hyper today! ;P Toodles!

Hey, beloveless here. See, I told you I'd check out your originals. Oh, here's some advice: I'd recommend putting this in the Slash section. More people visit the slash section than the supernatural/paranormal section, I think that would give you alot more hits and reviews if you did. On to the story criticism! Truthfully...I felt that the other one was better than this one. And not cause it was YYH (I mean, I love your other originals, especially the Legend of Cerafix, are you going to write a new chapter soon btw?) but because there's something missing that just makes your writing 'glow'. Don't get me wrong, the plot and characters are great but...I don't really know how to put it...Or maybe it's because I've read it before or something. I don't know. I don't really like to write reviews that aren't positive but since I basically promised to write you one, here it is! So anyway, I hope I've helped a little. And I'll continue to check up on you. ^__~

WONDERFUL, it is so good to find truequality again on AFF. Not to say that there are not some other good stories, but yours are among a high point in general. As for comparing this version to the old version it was a little while back that i read the first one but here is my view... You seemed to have avoided dealing with the family in this chapter, whether or not that was in the first chapter of the last one I forget, sorry bout that, busted head and all. I can't remeber details for the life of me. Other than that you did an excellent job giving life to background charecters without over complicating the plot and have worked your magic all over again. I eagerly await more,andif I over-analyzed anything here just ignore me nd atribute it to me busted 'ead and all. ARG THIS BE A SOUTHERN ACCENT!! (busted head)